Ohh this one is as painful as a biting chill on unprotected flesh. Cold is the perfect title. Sending hugs your way, Brenda 🧡

Is there a chance of finding someone who is worthy of the obviously very fine you? I hope so. 🙏🤗

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Chillingly painful with such raw grit, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Willow for let me say this is a powerful message with a great flow I am also sad about these things I don’t know what the answer is…I hate how people are treated I have skin ailment and can’t even get a refferal to a dermatologist because my primary says so… I hate how animals are treated it all makes me ill… what counts as compassion in this life it’s like a very painful soul ache to look around and think how can I change it… great write ❤️

Sing it you beautiful powerful woman!!

This is a great screw it list touching on so many hot topics, great piece Lady

Now this has me agreeing with it. What happened to save the trees, polar ice caps, the aquatic life, or us, damn it?

Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with a message that needs to be heard, which in fact should be screamed from the rafters in every corner of the world. Amazing work per usual. This is next level good. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow! What a powerful message, screamed at the whole humankind, especially at those who still believe that no damage towards the planet and our fellow humans had been done. I haven’t heard such an impressive and sadly urgently needed wake up call since a long time! Brilliant work, dear Willow!

Superb work. Excellent.

FUCK YEAH! Oh, fuck fuck fuck fucking Yeah, Willow. You need a big FUCK! for all of them, Willow. But there just aren’t enough fucks for all the FUCKS in the world ’cause they keep making more FUCKS who keep fucking things up! So FUCK THOSE FUCKING FUCKS!

Fucking right!
nice

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand said with love

Chère W.,
Your list and mine are almost identical.
At least my family didn’t tell me to shut up, but the in laws did.

My car’s a vegan car. And many more people will follow as soon as it dawns on them that there is money to be made in doing the right things for a change.
All my thumbs and kudos for you.

Yes, please also listen to Sappho/Elke’s Point of no return in audio and podcasts or some such thing. You’ll find your way, don’t rely entirely on the words of a dyslect.

Warm waives and regards, Gus

I’m with you on every point. Someway, somehow, the good, honest, and caring of this world must overcome the evil wave that now confronts us.

Sometimes the quickly captured thoughts make for better poetry……this one has.
Being human isn’t easy 💋

I’ve found that all emotions serve a purpose…we just can’t serve them. This is a brilliant piece. Fear and anger can be all consuming when given free rein

hello lovely Sapphire I understand this well I have a demon too that I am constantly biting my tongue it’s so hard great write ❤️

Powerfully penned, SW. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. I can definitely relate, amazing poem. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s always a reward to me to see you’ve posted something.
This is a strong write, surrounded by the songish rhymes. As if singing it under your breath as you venture into a struggle.
It’s better than you think.
Write it out, every time. It’s our sanity’s sake.

Thank you all for your kind words. I’m writing again this time mostly about strength and not wanting to wake my inner beast but its being tested. We’ll see what idea people deathly want to see

Superb work. Powerful.

Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend

This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.

hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️

Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!

Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.

can I watch? just kidding – sort of….

Makes me want to hop on the saddle. 😉

👅

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a sexy comment ❤️

NO – A nice one. 😉