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Thanks C
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Thanks Adira
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This one has bones & flesh…& teeth. Good to see your words again
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Thank you Willow
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So insightful and well written
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks Naaj
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Oh my goodness, Tim. This is just amazing… a three-way allusion. Such a beautiful interchange of reference from one to the other… withdrawal symptoms, sex, literary elements. I see the analogies melded together, the physical and emotional relationships. This is really smart. I love how you use rhyme in this piece and the second person narrative approach, which makes it more powerful. Very talented.
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Your words are sure fire penetration.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSome slight movement of the bed,At night,And I suddenly become alert;Is it shaking?Is it an earthquake?I stop and stare,But nothing moves anymore; It might have been an illusive perception,Or I have caused the movement Of the bed; I have...
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I’ve only experienced one in SD and it was freaky…nice look into your perception
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Thank you a lot.
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Cool structure…
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Thank you dear.
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Read MoreI once was a most beautiful thing a rose in full bloom now a gentle warm breeze blows the last of my petals to the ground. My scent too is fading barely a hint of it left, few bees or butterflies visit to take my seed to...
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Lovely..Nice work here.
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Enjoyed muchly…
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Read MoreI diethe common deathof a common lifesilent obscurityinsensitive dismissalinnocuous nothingan empty orbtransparent, delicate, meaninglessclinging to leafless branchesto hollow limbsanonymous bubbleawaitingatmospheric intrusionBriefly lived,adriftI bleedIridescent rainbow seedI breedsoap skin children
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A deep, grim poem that left me speechless!
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Surely not speechless, M.E.
Didn’t I tell you that you could burst my bubble?-
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Hopefully, breaking free. “)
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Ok, where is this seemingly endless depth you pull these words from??
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I’m so glad you like this, Drieks! It means a lot coming from such a deep thinker!
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Poets are running hot today….this is a real bloody cracker💋
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A bloody cracker? Whoa… that doesn’t sound very appetizing. Well, how did you know I’m a Vamp?
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Powerful. This gets me thinking.
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Blowing bubbles always helps me think, Thomas. Plus… it’s so sticky
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lol
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The way that I can relate; It’s almost as if, you’ve retrieved my exact thoughts from the endless depths of my mind. I love this. Absolutely beautiful, dampkitten. xx
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Thank you so much for this, PG! It means a lot. You are super talented.
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! So are you, I enjoy reading your work. xx
~P.G💋
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Wow… thank you! I’m glad you like this. I’m always wondering what you will think.
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Thank you, Dragon! Your comments are always awesome!
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you are never an everyday kind of woman .. and neither are your poems
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Well, maybe every other day. By the way, Sam… speaking of obscurity – your site is absolutely exploding, and my congratulations to you for your amazing success! I must say, you have the Midas touch, and you know where I’d like for you to put golden finger of yours?
xoxoxo
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Powerful and courageous…
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