Wow. Just wow.
So, did you want to fuck that woman in the restaurant or not?

Certain things in life men and woman will never understand about one another. I feel your pain but I don’t understand it.
Glad you enjoyed it. xox

Cool. Let’s make it happen!

Now you’ve done it. I’m scared to fucking death. I want an ovary transplant when I start to get hot flashes

LOL. Never heard of such a thing. Hormone supplements are the therapy of choice. It’s amazing how many girls I know get testosterone pellets. Apparently, it boosts libido massively. Yes, I said testosterone. Women have that too.

ahh… great to be reading you yet again my dear adored versatile prolific poet n my deep friend, loveable ev Keith:)

& yep this is a short sweet power packed write of yours.. that inching in nearness… that magnetic zing in that pulling in space.. that electrifying gentle touch n the massaging wetness of an aromatic shampooing act… aw you leave me absolutely wordless n stunned in this immense masterpiece so concise .. sensual n ah that stretch of peaking imagination that follows all .. is undeniably pure ecstasy.. whatev impure shade it may be filled in;)

n yes, you are there! that final closure of a topsy turvy twist keith-wise;)

to be honest, all along my maze of mind was wandering wondering over the laters & metaphors of this all, hidden or explicit;)

great take dear One xo

my first SR read here & yes this is epic:)

light love ev

uma

dear keith, co ing back to starsrite after sooo looong . Bad of me i know.. but will try to be here to read all your poets brilliance & hopefully will do some some scribblings of myself 🙂 Light love xx

Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.

We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.

Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.

The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.

Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.

I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.

Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
Nicely penned.

Great title

Pleasure journey

BIG LIKE

Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

I like this style of erotica.

damn. excellent write.

Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

xoxo

This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))