Sit down, take a seat
I can’t control myself
she’s about to wash my hair
her gorgeous body inches from my face
the water & her fingers interact with my scalp
the shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scent
my eyes closed as I begin thinking of unpure thoughts
for the few moments i have with her, it’s total ecstasy
then BAM!
faucets shut off, towel around my head and neck and it’s over
ahh… great to be reading you yet again my dear adored versatile prolific poet n my deep friend, loveable ev Keith:)
& yep this is a short sweet power packed write of yours.. that inching in nearness… that magnetic zing in that pulling in space.. that electrifying gentle touch n the massaging wetness of an aromatic shampooing act… aw you leave me absolutely wordless n stunned in this immense masterpiece so concise .. sensual n ah that stretch of peaking imagination that follows all .. is undeniably pure ecstasy.. whatev impure shade it may be filled in;)
n yes, you are there! that final closure of a topsy turvy twist keith-wise;)
to be honest, all along my maze of mind was wandering wondering over the laters & metaphors of this all, hidden or explicit;)
great take dear One xo
my first SR read here & yes this is epic:)
light love ev
uma
So glad you enjoyed this piece Uma. Thank you for reading and joining starsrite. xoxo