The way you move from accusation to release feels measured, almost gentle in its clarity.
That closing stanza settles like a door quietly closing. Beautifully written.

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write lots of layers my friend. I too have a vault so I can relate. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Oh, the nostalgia of teenage angst, I can relate. Excellent write with amazing wordplay you really know how to turn a phrase my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

The picture reminds me of Birds in the park.

Gorgeous spring vibes! 😎
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This pic is spring in all her glory, yes the birds in the trees, but also all of the other beautiful blooms and emotions of this season. Another tight one dude

Awesome painting, Speak. Thanks for sharing your other creative works. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Nice work Poet

Bat