You are asking a 14 year old boy such difficult questions…. Remember I wrote this when I was merely 14… after so many years I still do not have an answer

thanks James… I guess I was probably a better poet when I was 14 then I am now… getting old sucks

Thank you so much my friend. Very glad you enjoyed my story and that line. Really made my day. 🙂

John

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!