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Read MoreGood day to all of you!In 2018, when ‘songwriters in the Kitchen’ was still proudly up and running, there was a ‘Same Lyrics’ challenge going on for Christmas. I vowed not to do challenges and I vowed not to...
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Chère L.,
Since I’m a quarter French, a typical French start.
Hope this finds you well.If this comment is what you meant in the message?
If you intended to send me a poem (?), please send it to the e mail address:
Duhsjaak.13@gmail.comThank you anyway very very much for the compliments.
I’ll pass half of them to Michael A who wrote the lyrics.À same lyrics challenge, means that everyone who wants to be involved, writes a song to the same lyrics.
I believe that roughly 15 persons participated. But I’m not sure. It’s 7 years ago?!Grateful for your read and listen!
Warm regards, Gus
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Beautiful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Hoi Thomas,
Hope this finds you well?!Thank you for the compliments.
And also on behalf of Michael A (north east England), very grateful for you listen!
Kind regards, Gus
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This is a sweet read, and it is not annoying at all.
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Chère F.,
Hope this finds you well?!I do admire your talent and your writes, so I love a compliment if it’s coming from you.
Thank you so much!Warm regards, Gus
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a heartwarming, endearing ink. beautifully written. i enjoyed the charming, lyrical fluidity.
thank you, for your lovely words and a warm welcome, both are appreciated!
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Chère C.,
Now nice to see you again.
I must have done something wrong, since the reply I typed was lost. Sorry for that.Anyway, I am grateful for your listen. Also on behalf of Michael A of course.
See you around!
Warm regards, Gus
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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Damian DeadLove and
Mstrmnd1923 are now friends
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write about the art of dark seduction my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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Nice and naughty.
Good write Brenda.
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Read Moremy somberest feelings find youwith deep affection I greettouching your depths so you will know mewading in the deep so you would see the woman before youcollecting shadows from whispersthen presenting them to you as giftssecrets of my heart...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Sensual and somewhat sad. Well done.
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good day to you dearest Jim thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your understanding of the nuances here ❤️
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🙏💖
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The song is really beautiful, warm and joyous… as I was reading I could feel the melody and beat of it, I love the repeation and alternation between “I” and “you”, it’s like making vows between each other, a truly romantic and lovely love poem.