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    Sudden

       Show me your facewhen kindness is gone,and what's only present is a hymnand the memory of your beautiful heart.It was a stormy night,  I still remember,uneven breaths a handful of tears on my palms;“I don't want to be strong anymore.”“cary...

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    • Dearest Light💕
      You may not post that often, but when You do, for a moment at least, I swear You make the world feel a calmer and much better place by lending me the comfort of a warm glow, even in winter .. Neville 💛💛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻🌻👍

      • Sometimes I feel that I’ve lost it, but then comes sudden at times a heartwarming review from You* I read it enough times, and note this note of gratitude, “Thank You, then, now and later.”Me*☺️💕

    • Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊

      We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖

    • Brilliantly penned, Light. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊

      We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖

      P.S; this site is annoying at times, I replied to You since You left your heartfelt words but now I noticed it’s not under your review.

    • Good beautiful Coffee Morning ☕ my lovely friend 🌺

      Noooo worries, my poems won’t fly anywhere lol. Take care of yourself there and may life treats You only with kindness 🤍

      P.S, You are Gorgeous! ✨🌺💖💓🥰😍

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    the last time

       dare you breathe menot air,dare I lit my love in your eyesin your heart.   on earth, I walk my last timeundefeated and opened,as I've walked heavens many times I do know,the difference betweenthe touch and the sensation,between others and you.   ...

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    • When we write our words, we do leave pieces of us on the page. We are the words, we are the message that we want the reader to “breathe” in and savor. Your pen name, as one of the fundamental elements, is what is seen, heard and felt in this poem, Light! The air that words breathe!

      -Curt

      (ps. in your 3rd line did you mean to say “lit” or “light’ or “lite”?? I hope you don’t mind my asking.)

      • Good Coffee Morning ☕

        PLEASE, share and ask anything, it’s how we develop besides my English isn’t the best😊

        I mean the verb of “light”, lit, kindle… if You have suggestions or if You have other thoughts, I’m opened ears.

        Thank You again for such a kind and heartwarming visit, yesterday out of nowhere the first words of this poem were ringing in my head, so I said there is no problem in sharing something old. I’m happy I did 😊

    • I love the idea of poems as morsels of our soul.
      Lovely write.
      And the pic is beautiful!

    • Truly lovely. It’s gentle yet strong in its invitation. A lure perhaps. Of allure!

      • It’s also lovely that You could see it as “gentle yet strong” because it’s what I meant it to be😄. short, brilliant and a truly appreciated review! Thank You gratefully my friend ✨

    • Hi there sweet friend 🌸

      your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕

    • How I wish I had got here first .. I had been waiting for these words to ease or take away my hunger .. Having said that, I am not surprised that so many others beat me to them as I imagine those that have visited you before were just as hungry as me .. Another keeper as far as I am concerned .. Shine on dear Light now and always .. Your friend, Me .. 💛⭐🌟⭐🌟🌻👍

      • Neville never fails to make G girl’s heart smiles and flatter💓 I’m really and truly grateful for your words and friendship🤍 may your heart knows only joy and happiness ✨🙏🏻✨ your friend too, Me*

    • Hi there sweet friend 🌸

      your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕

    • I’ve checked some of your poems yesterday but there were unavailable to leave reviews, I thought I should tell You this 😊

    • I did read your Bio before checking your poems, so all is understand, it’s your respected choice to protect yourself and your poetry at the time being, Nice to meet You Fiery friend 🔥😊

    • The same to you lovely friend🌺 and a very Good Morning to you🌞 (it’s 10:31 am here). Have a fantastic beauty day, night and all times 🤍😊

    • Beautifully penned, Light. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    a hold of Autumn

     Here ends September,count for me,nine hundred lettersninety words,and a field full of wheatbreezing of abundance and grace.  Frankincense in the early morning,and sudden rain.this hold of autumnis a complete magnificence.unexpected,conscious,and it surrendersto the greater wholeness.'That's how I feel you.' a...

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    • The image that heads this page and these near perfect words will be visited many more time today by me (and I hope many others too ).. Oh’ and believe me, I have no doubt I shall hear & in my mind feel the cool rush of the first rains of autumn again and again .. But enough of that for now ..

      I feel compelled to point out that in my opinion, You have poemed a masterpiece and left it here as a gift for all those who either stumble upon it by accident as well as those like me who purposefully made their way here .. I know for a fact I have waited a long time for it to arrive .. but .. & it’s a BIG and true BUT, I could certainly feel it coming .. I only hope, wish and pray that one day, a certain someone will realise or otherwise be made aware that such a beautiful love poem features them in all but their name .. I can only imagine how awesome a feeling that would be .. Wishing You Peace, Love, strong black coffee and All other Good Things from my world to thine .. 🌻⭐💛👍

      • I think Mr. Neville is toooo generous to this G girl to the point of spoiling, BUT it doesn’t mean that she doesn’t like it😊. Thank You for such a sweet, uplifting, thoughtful and most kind review, it surely leaves my heart smiling specially after this long time of no writing, considering my latest few years and months, I don’t know if I will be able to write frequently as I used to, but I want to and I will try to keep the ink spilling. Thank You again with EVERYTHING beautiful and EVERYTHING you deserve 💖 sending You many graces 🌸🕊️🌺💕✨

    • My absolute pleasure my dear Friend .. 🌻⭐💛👍

    • The image and aroma of “Frankincense in the early morning/ and sudden rain”, not only ushers in a beautiful love poem but entices the reader to go on a wonderful journey into the colors and wonders of Autumn, to a place “where the heart sings of sentiment”, and where someone can find the “mystic of uncertainty”. WOW!! Such delightful lines of poetry. And I agree with Neville, I too, hope that whoever this poem is for, reads it and comes to “read you every night”, and writes you poetry.

      I am so glad that I found this poem, Light (an appropriate pen name), it’s extremely moving.
      -Curt

      • That’s what I can call a heartwarming masterpiece review😊 with deep kindness Thank You for taking the time to read and feel my poem with your beautiful heart, leaving me this sweet gift✨ many bright appreciations Mr. Curt💖

    • Beautiful writing…sincerely.

    • You are so sweet, kind and caring my friend, thank You so much for leaving another lovely gift on my poem, deeply appreciated 🤍💖

    • Tremendous work. I love it.

    • Beautifully penned, Light. Excellent write with dazzling imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I appreciate your visit and kindness too😊 Thank You so much for taking the time to read my poems and leave your thoughts my friend.

    • Days shorten
      Dreams lengthen

    • “I am waiting for you,
      under a new anticipated poem.
      and until October comes,
      keep me beautiful beside you.
      and read me every night,
      a hold of you,
      till I fall asleep
      and become a vision of love.”

      Sighhh!🌿

      I’ve been wondering to where such passionately blessed poetesses have vanished? Now, realizing the queen of romantic wonderment has returned, having only been on hiatus, tending to those fortunate enough in her life to receive the incomparable treasures of her gently giving, affectionately caring ⁓ free spirit.

      Radiating from the thrilling ambiancel of “a hold of Autumn” I’m gently, irresistibly drifted back to those many moments I could not wait each day to run and read just such enthrallingly captivating sentiments of pure love, pristine beauty, and blissful caresses composed so warmly and tenderly sincere unto luck-lucky me.

      Alas, c’est la vie … they live as vividly now as ever; yet, in the yearning depths of my heart’s and soul’s eternally grateful memory.

      With a masterful stroke of her artistically-blessed pen, filled by virtue of her magical skills in blending words, phrases, and imagery into endless colours, hues, and textures, she creates a virtual universe that dismisses the world around us, sweeping (ever-so smoothly) every eagerly willing, captively spellbound heart awayyy … annnd, what a perfect photo to set the ambiance of this incomparably wondrous moment.

      This illustriously rendered poem stands as testament to how powerfully enchanting a master’s pen truly can be, and ohhh, how I love and miss it so.
      Thank you, Dear Ghounwah, from my heart for sharing this spellbinding poetic composition from your depthless well of precious love! ⁓ Richard🖌

      • Good Wonder Morning Mr. Syr~

        It is a wonder-ful morning when someone reads such deeply sincere and heartfelt words, the most sparkling little stars dancing upon my page, but it’s not new from You The Master Bard and Reviwer, You always have been so generous and caring not only to me but to everyone even when You are giving advices for us, You did it without making us feel less or upset. I really appreciate every nuances You’ve left me here with your incomparable kindness and wisdom, I hope life is treating You with the same kindness You deserve but I also know as You’ve said, life is life.

        Sending You many grateful thanks and deep appreciation and respect, Stay Well 🙏🏻🤍✨🕊️

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