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Read MoreWhat's the point of life.Other creatures don't ask that question So in some ways human beings are cursed. Cursed because they recall the past, cursed because they imagine a future,cursed because they can think at all.What's the point of...
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Have a nice day 🙏
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Read Moredriven insaneblue and greysleek bodycobra grillheadlightscutting nightsengine roarsdual pipes wheels rollchrome artdescribingintricate fleshfingeringher six speedclutchingthat lust horsepowerequalsfrictionloving torquesport bodyinvitingthe curvestop down road readysoft highwaydrag stripstarting linemy mustangyour corvettewe embraceunique styles Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2019
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The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are welcome my friend 😊
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Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Awesome writing, dear Peter!
True love blooms only in freedom! Anything else is dependency or the wish to possess one another.
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Wisely penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend, speaking truth here. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful and vivid
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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. That’s a severe case of road rage. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is a severe case. No doubt. This was a fun write. Thanks my friend.
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Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art. Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art xoxo
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Appreciate the kind words Elke. Thank you!
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Read MoreHere comes the little manHe's really fucking shortBitter from an early ageWasn't born a midget or even a dwarf Never liked having to look upEvery time he needed to speakThey assumed he was an overgrown kidHe's about the height of...
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Aww that’s a sad tale. He should have seeked help
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Seeking help wasn’t in his vocabulary. He was a nut job. Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Sounds like a Napoleon Complex to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes it does. He needed to be locked up. Thanks my friend.
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Napoleons are a fucking nitemare, especially when one is rather lanky. They start arguments in an empty room and are never, ever wrong. Kid you not. An angry little man once attempted to headbutt me and my stomach felt the full force of his forehead.
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They sure can be a nightmare. WOW that sucks. Did you kick him in the nads?
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This is a meaningful and powerful writing, dear Keith! You are creating attention for those people who are a little different from others and are therefore often mocked. Nobody is without any flaws. All of us should be more tolerant and supportive, and most important of all, focus on inner wealth instead of appearance. Of course, being mocked isn’t an apology but maybe the violence could have been prevented.
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Thanks Elke. I appreciate the comments..always.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian