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What begun will be finished when I decide just how!! Yes, is a short-ish story, Fia Naturie; hope you enjoy what’s to come. Many thanks for your welcome. 🙂
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Interesting. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks for your welcome. Hope to continue or finish my short story later today, Saturday.
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Well, now you’ve got my curiosity up. What has happened to give Drenna this new direction and determination? Why has she been invisible? C’mon, Emma, we’ve got to know! (It’s so great to see you!)
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Need help here. Do I delete the summary and start the story, please very much?
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Read MoreUnder the slumping shoulders of the cafe's awningI watched tiny rain circles loosely burst in puddleson the ground whilemy hair lightly waved fromSeptember's weary winds.Nat King Cole sang softly"A Blossom Fell,"on small hanging speakers when she strolled byquickly catching...
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beautifully written I felt this 💕
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Thank you, Crimsin
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Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
Write it out amigo.-
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Thanks very much for your comment, Styx.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville
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I appreciate that, Neville, thanks. 🙂
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Read MoreMonroe stood looking through the mesh wire fence at the apple tree. Countless red, fat, orbs hung from every twig, glistening in the sunlight. This fence isn't too high to climb anymore, I think. When I was ten, it was,...
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Superb work.
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Thanks, Thomas.
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I’m with Thomas my friend .. this has got the Sam Dickens hallmark of excellence running write the way through it from one bloomin end to the other .. 🍎🍏🍏🍎😎👍 p.s. Apples indeed .. pull the other one .. Neville
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Thank you, my friend.
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Read MoreFear of Word Blindness Banks of blank ivorine stacked high but thinly like old oriental lacquered tsuba .. Each scream both loud and high enough to shatter those fragile hand blown champagne flutes you long treasured .. Whereas, somewhere else completely, rows of old scribes sit cross legged in their temples calmly contemplating white...
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This gives me old Korean movies with the monks or a person taking notes, sitting and writing, and people ignoring them as they go about having their conversations.
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That’ll do nicely thanks a minion Fia .. 😎👍
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Many thanks brother T .. Neville
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Nice, pleasant work.
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Many thank you’s Daniel .. Kind regards and all good things, Neville 😎👍
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I see it as concern for a world that may be in trouble or a culture that may be disappearing.
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I always thought you had a good eye Tim .. now I know we both proved you write .. kindest regards, Neville
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I’m not sure if I got You right here, but in my mind I see it as the fear of writer’s block, maybe because I see myself here with the white pages waiting for words… Good Coffee Saturday ☕
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There’s no other that can read me quite the way You read me my Friend .. Thank You so very much .. Neville make mine a dubble & I’ll be write around .. ☕☕😎👍
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