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Read MoreIn the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore rainlike tight-fitted jeanswhich clung to them soggyin moments of gleewith a spin and a spreethey giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds,as each soaking thudof their shiny red bootsforced a...
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I did it in high school one day with a friend. We kicked a can in the front of the school in pouring rain and kids were watching from the windows. He’s since passed away so I’ll always remember that day being glad we did it. 🙂
And yeah, us kids also ran in yards in the rain leaving our parents aghast. lol
Thank you for the comment, Adelly. 🙂
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childhood was full of such days for me I’ve always been an outdoor person this is beautiful Tim ❤️
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Thanks so much Crimsin. I appreciate your comment. 🙂
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Powerful. So true.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Excellent write with a nostalgic flavor my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Time you word painted a vision of innocence here. I am enchanted by the scene you wrote so well. You captured the joy of childhood wonderfully and i enjoyed this much.
John
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Dearest Light💕
You may not post that often, but when You do, for a moment at least, I swear You make the world feel a calmer and much better place by lending me the comfort of a warm glow, even in winter .. Neville 💛💛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻🌻👍-
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Sometimes I feel that I’ve lost it, but then comes sudden at times a heartwarming review from You* I read it enough times, and note this note of gratitude, “Thank You, then, now and later.”Me*☺️💕
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.. 💛🌻⭐🌟🌻👍x
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Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊
We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖
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Brilliantly penned, Light. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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much appreciation for You and your sweet review. Thank You 😊
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Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊
We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖
P.S; this site is annoying at times, I replied to You since You left your heartfelt words but now I noticed it’s not under your review.
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Good beautiful Coffee Morning ☕ my lovely friend 🌺
Noooo worries, my poems won’t fly anywhere lol. Take care of yourself there and may life treats You only with kindness 🤍
P.S, You are Gorgeous! ✨🌺💖💓🥰😍
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Superb work.
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Thank You so much 😊
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Read MoreEvery dayanother bite,another piece of my being taken.Like cloth, It shreds.Through lightning bloodmy mind mere dustat end of day.Life - the vulture,with disdainful agilitychews slowly,rips at meready to feedon my carcass.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Speaking truth my friend, this has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for your input, Damian.
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Boom. You nailed it.
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ha-ha thank you, Thomas.
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I like this! I may expound on this in a different way.
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Beat my guest. 🙂
Thanks, Paula.
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Finished it. It’s entitled Alzheimer’s and it will be posted tomorrow sometime around noon. My first posting tomorrow and it will be dedicated to you.
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Then I’ll be reading it. Thank you, Paula. ; )
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You wove this metaphor brilliantly my friend. Great raw poetry that holds nothing back. Great work my friend.
John
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Oh! This reminds me of when me and my brother would play in the rain when we were kids.
In the front yard we didn’t have stickers so we would be barefoot. Lol
Good times!