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    I lose Control

    I JUST LOSE CONTROL (It amazes me. Take a song from a long time ago, add a conversation with a close friend, and kiss your Muse. Here is what happens.)     “ooh ooh baby when you’re near me, I just lose control. I feel the earth...

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    • so very lovely and refreshingly romantic ❤️

      • Crimsin! So nice of you to visit and leave me such wonderful words on this poem. I hope you don’t mind, I sent you a friends request and will visit your page to read some of your works.

        Thanks again.

    • Mary, Mary, HI and Hello and I am out of control seeing that you are here, leaving me an “amazing”. Okay Curt, calm down, behave, it’s your friend Mary. Stay in control, she likes your poem, everything is okay! Hi Mary, this is the “nice” redzone. I come once in a while cause Curt is excitable, especially when Valuptas is visiting and “whispers” at one of his poems. If his excitement bothers you, just bop him upside his head. 🌹

    • WHEEEE, redzone is excited and dancing around… UPSIDE DOWN!!!! er.. ;0)

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    No Diggity

    No Diggity (revolution is real and will be televised)   Damn girl, work it with them beats moving your sway and the jazz is sweet.   The beat drops into California rockin’, Tupac lays down the rifs; west coast east coast, shakin’, shakin’, there’s an uprisin’ in the clubs tonight.   Damn people, rockin’ east coast west coast worldwide...

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    • I know, I know. I need to do this, make an audio. I’m kind of scared it will sound like shit. Maybe I should do an AI version. And Canva is a good app to use for this?!

      Thanks Mary.

    • I can feel the movement in this! It’s got some heat on the burner!

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    Mirislavka

    Mirislavka Without any doubt    all the village boys wanted her .. Those with a pulse,    pubes and piercings did anyway .. The rest were either far too young, or too old to even contemplate what they    each knew to be unobtainable .. Even those feral twins who every now and...

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    • Desire and lust–she certainly has the right stuff to stir emotions and fan passionate flames inside of boys, men, and grandpas who ain’t dead yet. She reminds me of the gas station owner’s wife who’d sell us boys cokes and peanuts, then send us away with big lumps in our pants. (Through no fault of her own–all she did was make change and smile) Thoughts of your Mirislavka will be with me all day.

    • Bless you Sam you just made this old fella’s day .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍

    • Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write with brilliant detail and wonderful storytelling my friend. Outstanding work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Beautiful Bruises

    Beautiful Bruises I cannot keep this to myself he said and then he kissed her shoulder naked .. Although indeed, that move was oh’ so very lightly executed .. Then resting on both elbows down he went oh’ so very low and slow .. Though...

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    Cova

    Cova Cova spoke most fondly of her    Andalusian sea .. She also spoke five languages    including mine .. Cova wore no prints upon her pretty finger tips and at first, I thought she was    a Basque spy .. Cova carried the scent of rock pools and...

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    • I wonder if she left because she was scared that she would feel more than just a fling or did she just want you to pay for the bill. Enjoyed this.

      • I wish I knew too .. but I’m glad you stopped by and gave my little scribble the thumbs up Fia .. Many thanks .. Neville 😎👍

    • Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I don’t know, one minute she was there and the next .. she was just history and a poem in the making .. However, I sincerely thank you for stopping by .. Neville 😎👍

    • A captivating write! Well done, Neville! “)

    • Your the Boss I can live and run with that .. thanks again & truly tooly .. Neville 😎👍

    • Great write and deserving of a silver medal.
      Cova left because she knew if she stayed three people would suffer.What a beautiful kind soul she was.
      Just think, she’s out there somewhere reading a poem or singing a song and there you are ….right there in her mind.
      See….she never left you.
      🙏

    • What a deliriously delightful thought you have left here for me .. Thanks a million Peter .. Seasons best & all good things for the swiftly approaching New Year .. Neville

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