I JUST LOSE CONTROL
(It amazes me. Take a song from a long time ago, add a conversation with a close friend,
and kiss your Muse. Here is what happens.)
“ooh ooh baby
when you’re near me,
I just lose control.
I feel the earth move under my feet
I see the sky come tumblin’ down
whenever you’re around…”
~~Carole King
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You say: “Why do you give me so much power?
I could turn you inside out
if I wanted to, or tried to!”
I reply: “’Cause I want to!”
Yes, you could easily turn me
inside, outside, upside down.
Explainable?
No more than trying to explain
why a western breeze
carries your scent.
Or, why seeing your smile
is like standing naked
under a rain forest waterfall;
its cool mists creating goose bumps
and awaking me to life.
There are an infinity of explanations.
Yet, it comes down to only one-
I really really really, like you.
And this, mon ami,
is more than enough reason
to give you power in my life;
to want you to turn me
inside, outside, upside down.
~~redzone 5.29.06








so very lovely and refreshingly romantic ❤️
Crimsin! So nice of you to visit and leave me such wonderful words on this poem. I hope you don’t mind, I sent you a friends request and will visit your page to read some of your works.
Thanks again.
thank you sounds great 😊
I agree with Crimsin. Amazing!
Mary, Mary, HI and Hello and I am out of control seeing that you are here, leaving me an “amazing”. Okay Curt, calm down, behave, it’s your friend Mary. Stay in control, she likes your poem, everything is okay! Hi Mary, this is the “nice” redzone. I come once in a while cause Curt is excitable, especially when Valuptas is visiting and “whispers” at one of his poems. If his excitement bothers you, just bop him upside his head. 🌹
You’re too sweet. Excitement is acceptable, lol.
WHEEEE, redzone is excited and dancing around… UPSIDE DOWN!!!! er.. ;0)