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Read MoreYou opened the door,a spill of light illuminating you from behind—the soft blue of your pajamascatching the glow, tracing every quiet detail of you. A chill had whispered through the air,and I saw the way your body listened—a quiet shiver,a tightening,a...
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Thanks Fia!
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Great writing and images. Love it.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Tim!
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Perfect imagery…..at least in my head.
Great write.👍
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In my head too! Thanks for stopping by, Peter.
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Superb work.
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Thanks Thomas!
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Nice. How many of us have written of such a view! Your version is wonderfully attentive without being overtly sexual. It’s about the simplicity of the beautiful construct of her anatomy. Admiration.
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Thank you for such a kind review, Styxian.
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Read MoreThe Wind Cried MaryThe wind,called her nameand shewas then gone ..But a starwas born insteadand whileno one knows forcertain ..Just how many stars burn bright each and everysingle night ..Mark these wordsof mine myfriend, for anotherone shall surely shine...
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This is so raw and open. I guess she wanted you to go on. Keep the memory in your mind but not a gravestone to visit.
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Thank you kindly Fia .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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This shines. Well done brother.
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Bless you brother T .. N 😎👍
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. I seen this happen with my grandparents on my mom’s side. My Nan passed first, and Pop went on for a few years without her. But he wanted to be with her, he was lost without her. I can relate. Thanks for sharing this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks indeed Damian 😎👍
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You have my tears… that final line was sudden and caught my heart completely. Thank You for sharing this with us Open and Raw (good title for a poem 🙂 ). This gem and masterpiece is not less than the previous one, each line is very special, cary the genuine of your emotions. I can’t really express how beautiful and special it is…Thank You again for sharing it with us🌸 please be well soon 🙏🏻💕
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I really can not thank You enough dearest Light💕 I so hope You know that .. 💛⭐🌻
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💖❤️💕🌺🌻⭐💛
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Checked .. 💖❤️💕🌺🌻⭐💛👍
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Check out Light💕 😊
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt isn’t solitude that killsbut loneliness.Not the want of company,but the ache left by thosewho once knew your silenceswho once saw into your soul. You can stand in a room bursting with laughter and still feel no touch of being...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent fucking write my friend. This has layers and I dig layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSmoke curls along the alley, and in the shifting haze a mural dragon stares down, its scales chipped, yet the gaze still remains— a watcher above the street. A café door swings open, voices spill into the night, debating ethics over bitter coffee, their words rising, then breaking apart like...
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Powerfully penned, Kesner. Killer imagery and an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Damian. Good to hear from you, here. Cheers.
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Hi there. Love the atmosphere & description on this write. Marvelous!
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Thanks, voi. Good to hear that. Very, very much appreciated 🕊️🙏
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Read MoreI am slowly going through this phaseWhere I'm lost in a crazy mazeDaydreaming riddled dreams of rageCan I escape this locked in cageDisheveled chaos filled my mindReality I left behindFollowing blind leading the blindMy minds confusion by designShadowed shadows...
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. I dig layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you..I am glad u enjoyed the layers
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That damn wind told her secret. This is good. I enjoyed it