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Read MoreBitternessYour life in bitternessHatredHate consumes your every emotionYour soul is engulfed with blacknessPutting your guilt upon othersHate takes over your lifeHate takes over your mindYou feel your life slip awayWhen you live your life in hateYou seal your destinyYou've...
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian.
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Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.-
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Your words always shine PAR. Thank you for this feedback.
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This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
The contrast between hate and love is simple, direct, and effective.-
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Appreciate the feedback Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreAs odd as it may seemThis reality is only a dreamLike millions of insects freezing to deathSociopathic is my mathematicsThe final answer is zeroC'mon, you'd love to be the superhero The processed foods of your laborsHave decayed into diseaseAnd the...
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Stay away from processed foods. They will debilitate you and eventually kill you! Thanks Fia!
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Read MoreIf you could disappear, I'd be a happy manWhat does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time Take a huge bite of my psychotic addictionCome a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchenConsequences...
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Oh man the enemy is within. Only you can break yourself down. Good spill
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Appreciate that Fia. Thank you!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some of my pieces I feel I’m possessed. When the writing session is over, I go back to my laid back, humble ways. Thanks man.
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Love it when you’re SO dark, Mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello HJ. I thank you for the generous comments here. The darkness comes out every so often. Happy that you enjoyed this.
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Read MoreThe big bad heart “Maybe I possess the big bad heart that thunders within this wolf body.” The big bad tongue “Maybe I can lick clean your bones with my big bad tongue!” The big bad she-wolf “Maybe...
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Wolves are back! Big bad and naughty wolves. The Wolves you are writing about seem to be more seductive and haunting than threatening.
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I am slogging at the library right now reading through the first draft making revisions. About to transcribe it from my notebook to the computer so I can send it to you finally. Ughhhhhh writing is such a process, Elke! Haha 😂
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Read MoreOur world as we know ittwisted brick by brickA world so twisted we kill our healthy and heal our sick Against our mother, pro all nature we bleed with vile religious crazeAll for war-induced pharmaciesin a 2 feet blinding maze This...
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams
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Thank you for reading and listening! 🙏
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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Thank you so much for your kind words Rosie! It really means a lot 🙏🏻
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian