Bitterness
Your life in bitterness
Hatred
Hate consumes your every emotion
Your soul is engulfed with blackness
Putting your guilt upon others
Hate takes over your life
Hate takes over your mind
You feel your life slip away
When you live your life in hate
You seal your destiny
You’ve sealed your fate
Love… forgotten
Jealousy
Don’t take your revenge against me
Pride
Your pride builds up inside
I’ve got no time for your ignorance
You live in your own complacency
You’ve made your choices
You’ve set your life
You feel your life slip away
When you live your life in hate
You seal your destiny
You’ve sealed your fate
Love…forgotten
Love
Compassion should be shown to all
Guilt
A full changing of the heart
Self control is the key
Bought by he who is King
Forgiveness must be yours
If you want a real change of the heart
You feel your life slip away
When you live your life in hate
You seal your destiny
You’ve sealed your fate
Love… forgotten








Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian.
Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.
Your words always shine PAR. Thank you for this feedback.
This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
The contrast between hate and love is simple, direct, and effective.
Appreciate the feedback Thomas. Thank you!