Cleverly penned, M.E. This is a very witty write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very creative. Excellent work.

This poem kicks so much ass! I love it! Offbeat, strange, smart, violent..you! I can see this becoming a film. Extraordinary creativity here.

Hmm, no one was wounded, you say. Cupid was shot. lol this is good;)

You made my day with your sweet comment. I am glad you liked it. Thank you! “)

This is the first and only piece of yours I have read so far. I must admit, I am intrigued. I stumbled upon you only because you were online (so few are at one time, I have found). But I like it very much; you made me smile with your shots at Cupid, and oh, yes, th little fucker has messed up so many lives, yes? However, I have ulterior motives as well. I am trolling for writers who use audio in their work. We now have a new category for what we do here: Spoken Word, and I am looking for those of us who do that. If so, or you just want to explore the possibilities, hit me back and let’s talk. I think you know HER; aske her about it.

I was trying to get a Spoken Word group going here, but that fell through; however, I did manage to get a Spoken Word category for us when we publish pieces — or edit them — if you have audio embedded on the page. We now have a pretty good start at a Spoken Word library if you check it out. Jut choose CATEGORIES on the main banner, then Spoken Word on the dropdown.

Moving verse with mystery woven in.
Regards James

Well done ink

Bat

An insightful write! Unfortunately the quill of the greats are considered rare goods nowadays.

Good job, Thomas!

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Insightful and precise write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You brought up some amazing points in this. We are aĺ human, doing human things. Even our avoidance we are slightly similar. Like this poem very much.

hello dearest Benny I wonder if we don’t manifest in more than one place…I like occupying a body but it is uncomfortable but it allows so much for us to interact with each other enjoy our surroundings and eat…someday our souls may return to spirit I don’t know this is deep 💕

Honest, yet not at all devoid of fun. 😉

hello beautiful Fia I’ve been getting to know you reading you it’s clear you’re a powerful woman…I’m unsure what it is that makes you stronger than romance I know I obtain for personal reasons maybe I just don’t buy into it maybe you are the same great write 💕

Powerfully penned, Fia. You really been on a roll lately, incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Exquisite piece of poetry. Well written Fia.

Sometimes it’s the right person at the wrong time. Great ink.

BIG

Thank you, and how you changed the writing typography only enhanced the piece. It has been an enjoyment to work with you.

And, thank you right back, Fia! =)

You’re such an easy breeze to write beside.
It was interesting fun blending our individual skills and learning how you think.

You’re uniquely special! ⁓ Richard🖌

Beautifully penned, Richard & Fia. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

A great collaboration between the both of you. The wording brings attention to every detail like it was under a microscope. Two great writers together….great stuff. 🙂

This flows smoothly, sweetly and flawless, the reader won’t feel it’s a collaboration at all, I like how it’s like small promises come together to bond as a one loving poem, the title is wonderful too, a wonderful collaboration for sure. Thank You both.