OUR DAY….
Sitting alone …
gazing into your photographic image
longingly recalling how days past,
wicked or sweet, truly could be.
Reminiscing your eyes’ wonders,
their beautiful allure whenever
smiling softly into my own.
Holding hands;
it was our very first time,
somehow seemed to announce
to everyone our proud “Exclusivity.”
I swear I’d heard doves cooing softly,
felt clouds sharing sun’s warm rays,
as your fingers smoothly let loose,
amongst ooos, ahhhs ’n sighs …
because thereon, pressing tenderly,
your loving lips anointed mine …
searingly engraved deep into my soul
like words inscribed pon finest glass,
eternally marking this Our Day.
Co-write by Fia & Richard
© 10 July 2025








Thank you, and how you changed the writing typography only enhanced the piece. It has been an enjoyment to work with you.
And, thank you right back, Fia! =)
You’re such an easy breeze to write beside.
It was interesting fun blending our individual skills and learning how you think.
You’re uniquely special! ⁓ Richard🖌
Beautifully penned, Richard & Fia. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
Thank you, Syr Damian 🤜🌿🤛
Both, for your gracious compliments and your expressed appreciation … this means a lot to me, and I’m sure to Fia, as-well.
Many blessings unto thee! ⁓ Richard🖌
A great collaboration between the both of you. The wording brings attention to every detail like it was under a microscope. Two great writers together….great stuff. 🙂
Hey, Buddy!
Sorry I missed your nice review ; the site missed sending me email notifications for awhile, burt it seems to be sorted now.
Thank you for looking-in! ⁓ Richard🖌
This flows smoothly, sweetly and flawless, the reader won’t feel it’s a collaboration at all, I like how it’s like small promises come together to bond as a one loving poem, the title is wonderful too, a wonderful collaboration for sure. Thank You both.
Greetings, Lovely Light💕
Thank you for the sweet gifts of your delightfully encouraging comments on this rather romantic Free Verse piece.
Actually, I wrote none of it, but did edit it for Fia into the format your see presented above.
It was my pleasure to help her.
Blessings to thee, Dear Ghounwah ⁓ Richard🍂
Ooh! sorry for the misunderstanding, I thought it’s a complete co-write, anyway it’s a wonderful poem in words and format😊
Well,
I knew you had no way of knowing that, and I know you know I always want You to have the truth from Me. 🙏
😊