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OUR DAY…. (co-write with Fia Naturie)

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Summary:
Thank you ever-so warmly, Fia, for allowing me to share in presenting this lovely Free Verse piece with you.

                 OUR DAY….

Sitting alone …
gazing into your photographic image
longingly recalling how days past,
wicked or sweet, truly could be.
Reminiscing your eyes’ wonders,
their beautiful allure whenever
smiling softly into my own.

Holding hands;
it was our very first time,
somehow seemed to announce
to everyone our proud “Exclusivity.”

I swear I’d heard doves cooing softly,
felt clouds sharing sun’s warm rays,
as your fingers smoothly let loose,
amongst ooos, ahhhs ’n sighs …

because thereon, pressing tenderly,
your loving lips anointed mine …
searingly engraved deep into my soul
like words inscribed pon finest glass,
eternally marking this Our Day.

Co-write by Fia & Richard     
© 10 July 2025     

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    11 COMMENTS

    1. A great collaboration between the both of you. The wording brings attention to every detail like it was under a microscope. Two great writers together….great stuff. 🙂

    2. This flows smoothly, sweetly and flawless, the reader won’t feel it’s a collaboration at all, I like how it’s like small promises come together to bond as a one loving poem, the title is wonderful too, a wonderful collaboration for sure. Thank You both.

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