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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Read Morepart one:All addictions start with suffering.All addictions end with suffering.part two:Addiction beginswhere silence screams.Voids filled withthe cold retreat of alcohol,tobacco’s dry whisper,the sharp thrill of cocaine,gambling’s pulse,screens pulsing past midnight,the slow hunger for shopping,the aching need for moisture from...
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hello dearest Benny my pain is just too great to live any other way I’ve really honestly tried more than once and I will never willingly put myself through that again… this is powerful if you have a better way to cope I am happy for you my friend ❤️
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The root cause of all suffering is thinking.That’s where the answer lies.
I coped by reading as much as I could about depression, grief,the way our minds work and trick is.The best material,without sounding religious,was in Buddhism.
Happy to share some authors with you if you’re interested.
🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Intelligent poem here dude. Well said and well executed.
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Brilliant work.
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Read MoreIt is said The Heretics of Horatio are of unscripted nature For their will is HIS and HIS is truthThus it was a giftThus it was a creedEven a God's voice proved falsely refined Paled in time as does all things...
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Thank you so much! I am hoping to write more soon!
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Read MoreYou take thesmall pleasures whenthey come,like vanishing gnats.The black cat rolls onthe freshly vacuumedcarpet,reaching every spotand fiber, to satisfythe deep need for relief.My good friend died thismorning.Cirrohis--his lover became a killer.Motherfucker, I'm sick ofdeath.Neon orange sadness.Three beautiful orphans behind.The...
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One hell of a write.
Go back to bed and rest.
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Thank you.
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Haunting piece of poetry Thomas. Dark and claustrophobic. Wonderfully executed!
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Thanks, my friend.
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my condolences a very well written piece this pulls at my heart my son was 37 when he died that way leaving a family behind great write ❤️
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. I relate to this one. Sorry about your friend, that sucks. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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Ouch’ I’m guessing we all get duff days .. but this one takes some beating .. My sincere condolences Thomas .. just be sjure to write on brother .. Neville
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thanks, my friend
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More