Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. I like the way certain lines contradict one another. Nice touch. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benny for the most part I cannot connect with people as they only offer the surface I hear this well written and deeply felt poem ❤️

Thanks folks

Ohh the passion in the write and the meaning touched me.

Powerfully penned, Peter. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend this has layers, I dig layers. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is great, the last lines are cutting and real.
Stinging also.
Kind Regards
James

That is the truth my friend. Totally accurate. Great description. To the point.

These days time is going fast…. so fast. I also wonder about the past years where did they go… It’s when the body starts to fail the one stats feeling old, but truth the soul never gets “old” but more wiser, brighter… There is a part of me which doesn’t grow up no matter how many years pass, I don’t know if it’s good or bad in this world, but it’s just me being me. I should check out your channel soon. Wishing You only peace and warmth in your days🤍

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend and so spot on. You’ve captured the aging process perfectly. Appreciate you.

Damian

I recently said to someone that I don’t recall ever being offered the extended warranty, but I’m not much impressed with the limited warranty. When it goes, so does everything else. You’re right, it doesn’t move slowly

Thank you, Willow.

Powerful work. Tremendous.

“We clone our fears
Copy-paste the pain
Pouring out the doubts like drops of rain
Lessened by the scars we quietly bear
Weakened by the reasoning we wouldn’t dare”

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics my friend, that verse I quoted, is so raw and authentic. Amazing arrangement that enhances these amazing words. I’m a fan. Appreciate you.

Damian

The lyrics and voice breathe in that space between hope and desolation, where very few are self-aware enough to tread. A glittered gift you possess. May I ask of your music influences? Without music the world dies.

This song hits me differently when I feel so tired and head is pounding from the beginnings of a migraine. Its like I can feel
this line “Oh the shadows speak when the lights go dim, Invisible projections crawl from within”
This is a great write

On going battle. Interesting work here.

Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Life often feels like a constant circle to me, everything eventually comes back around. This write made me think of that again, so thank you. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian