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    lavendar feelling

    lavendar sung for megently as the wind blew carrying its fragrancesuch a beautiful melody my soul alone could hearpurple delicate and truerevealed what was still goodmy thoughts vibrate with their songthe humming carried me alongunderstanding flora connecting me to...

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    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      We’ve an allotment garden (edge of Amsterdam – so we’re rich) and use lavender as a separation between patches of veggies. We don’t have to (will never) use chemicals and as a bonus, all the bees in the neighbourhood love us. They set our garden in motion, because they constantly move the lavender flowers with their weight.

      30 meters of lavender? Easily!
      You just made me think of all the lavender we’ve chopped, bound and hung in the log cabin. The whole cabin smells lovely.
      How lovely that you posted this poem.
      Warm regards, Gus

      • hello dearest Gus it sounds like a dream come true so beautiful I love the garden it’s where I can hear our creator the best watching nature at work and listening to the Earth’s voice thank you graciously for sharing such a lovely scene from your life with me ❤️

    • This is fantastic, Brenda. Bravo!

    • hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously by the way why aren’t you allowing comments I thought your latest dark indeed ❤️

    • Peaceful & quite lovely. xox

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    veneer

    your soul pulls me deeply down into your depthssuch a mysterious powerto hold and fascinateyour seductive prowessohhh it's what you domy body languishesmy thoughts dreamto hold you close fills me with trepidationbut my mind dares me come closersecond guess...

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    Father

    tic toc I heard silently inside methe second hand swung and time stopped suddenlymy soul frightened look aboutGod in his glory had come to see mehis eyes full of doubt beheld my visionswe were reviewing my misgivingshe didn't care...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. A heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • good morning dearest Damian thank you for the love on this I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️

    • We are hardest when judging ourselves not even realizing we don’t deserve it for even the father forgives. Tight

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    Acid Rain (song)

    Among the rain drops I walkSkin barely soaked while I talk Apparently to no one Alone yet so combined in my thoughtsI choose to believe I’m being mocked Apparently by no one Acid rain for the people walking byFriendly faces warm the hearts...

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    sideways

    there is a dismal weight of blood and bonesecured to the pain of it allscheming flesh longs to esape and take my soul with itleaking promises of reprievethere is a misery one can drinkit intoxicates making one dizzydistlled hurt...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words hit with the might of a sledgehammer my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here it’s felt deeply ❤️

    • Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.

      • thank you graciously dearest Thomas I was reading your poem and realizing my drug use puts me in danger much like your poem I would never intentionally kill myself but accidental could happen it’s sobering ❤️

    • This shows your talent as a writer and very good.

      • thank you dearest Adagio I was drawing on my days in the past and my current addictions ❤️

    • hello dearest poet this was from a time in my life I was taking about twenty sleeping pills at a time not realizing that could kill me as I was writing this I thought I would never kill myself intentionally but then I remembered my behavior and how a lot of famous people who have died unitentionally it was sobering thank you for being thoughtful ❤️

    • you are rude and thoughtless…

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