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Read MoreI've been a soldier all my lifeserved with honour,behind enemy lines.Fought ferocious battleswith limited weapons.Captured and tortured—more than once.Escaped my tormentors—more than once.Recaptured—more than once.Changed and scarred;fighting does that to you.Tired beyond tired,ageing rapidly,seeking peacebefore death.It’s confession time:my enemy...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Life often feels like a constant circle to me, everything eventually comes back around. This write made me think of that again, so thank you. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian for your considered comment.
I try not to over complicate or force my writing.A thought just arrives ( at strange moments) that needs to be explored.
For example, while waking this morning I had a simple thought which I haven’t quite been able to expand on…’what is actually real’…might have to work on this one.
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Read MoreCan I speak to you?raw and openof a once mesmall and soft like a snowflake,coarse and demandinglike the snow.of a once me,loved by one rulethe rule of infinite divinity.Wasted in the devastationof war and mundanenessa once me,never wanted youor them...
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Tremendous. Vulnerable and real. Powerful writing.
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Good Morning🤍 and thank You for your true words and kind visit. Much appreciated*
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Lovely thoughtful beautiful
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How kind of You😊 Thank You for your time and nice review.
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Good Morning 🌞 and thank You kindly for your thoughtful and effective review my friend🤍 I appreciate it so much💕
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hello dearest poet I’d swear yoiu were singing my song lol great write ❤️there was a time in my teens this was true I was a complete night person never really seeing the sun…
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Thanks for your motivational words. Feeling like a vampire. Yes it gets very gloomy at times. We lose an hour of light in the UK in winter and the clouds block out the sun, and its damp and cold and…
You get the picture.
Regards
James
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Very relatable. Excellent work.
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Thanks for you words of strenght. I’m waiting for the spring. The only thing I like about winter is the leafless trees.
Regards
james
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Read MoreI look into your tear-some eyes with profundity. I scout with a penetrating gaze and see your realm of watery graves. Those eyes of yours are the gates, beyond the reeking eyes is an abysmal mind. The anguish welled within, there I meet you to bathe...
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Sad, tragic, real. This is one heavy piece. Great work nevertheless
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Read MoreUnder the winter day’s whispery glow, all is quiet here. This is my shattering. No more hymns of breath. Just waiting beside my tombstone. Dressed wildly in vines of time. Had you been a ghost too, would you have noticed me? Must death be the only way? Bound now...
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Awesome! Great write. Love the atmosphere. Bookmarking this one.
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On going battle. Interesting work here.