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hello dearest Benny I understand what you mean my pain is beguiling thank you for the advise 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, just keep moving forward. It’s easier said than done I know, but eventually the clouds will part, and let in the light. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yesterday was just a hard day thank you for the words of encouragement 💕
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Moods often bring darkness that is hard to swallow.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you my friend for being here I hope you listened to the song 💕 it is haunting…
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I did.
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreSo much pain sent within a shockwave Voices turn silent when riddled with fear Wearing a face that only appears brave Underneath it stirs a torment more severe Out in the ether the air has grown dense Seems the grass is dead on the...
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Im reminded of the old adage…if it seems too good to be true, it probably is. Goes right back to your other poem…gotta read the fine print. Believe the lies, trust the cardboard cut out caricature, you get what you deserve. Hitting nails on the head with a jack-hammer, as usual, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, all the old adages and wives tales are quite accurate. You know me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian karma always has her way well said I am depressed it feels heavy this poem great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“Been swindled under some false pretense”, def felt that line.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“grass is dead on the other side”. The older I get the more I feel that. Great ink.
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I was just about to quote that as well. So powerful!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s one of my favorite lines as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I read and reread your poem. Took me into the heart of chasing rainbows and the stark reality that often is at the other side. Superbly crafted poem.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That hits with a quiet force—like courage stitched from trembling threads. The contrast between silence and the mask of bravery unveils a moment of deep vulnerability, almost like a portrait of someone holding themselves together just enough to get by. It carries the weight of all the things left unsaid when fear takes the reins.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Wow, you are so spot on with your commentary. Nice job catching all that, brother. I know I can jam a lot of things into a write. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
We’re in the thick of Summer time, baby. Have drink and a drive and go see what you can find! DON’T do that, actually!! I’m just getting into the spirit of things. Still, enjoy your summer. It won’t last long. How many you got left?
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Read MoreEarly spark & saunterthe morning stalksa warmed-up,chilled-outflowering, first...this heat(more like a buzz)all through the night:a zephyr-frozenspear of lightspits the stoneon a space ofwavering daysstabbing westwardgrowls for hopethrough a howling gustwhere the darkness stretchesthought & prayersfor old friendsI should've had...
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Powerfully penned, Ben. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Still enjoy reading your idiosyncratic word play. You’ve a talent 👍
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Read Morethere came a time when what I had so long denied in truth…deeply buried refusing to acknowledge it (because truth...was more than I could carry)it erupted...and all sound went silent for a frozen moment a vacuum whine slowly building sharp in the back of my mind (and I...
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Terrific write Willow….very very good.🙏
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Thank you, Peter. That means a lot to me
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All I have is a pen, girl, no sword. But what do they say? The pen is mightier than the sword?
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The opening of this with the whispering was perfect. I can feel your words through the music nice melding.
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Thank you, Fia
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Bella. Bravissima! 🌼
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Many thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! The arrangement worked nicely with the words, whispers well placed, the piano was also a great choice. Amazing work my friend, excellent execution. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one is actually part of my book, From the Ashes. I always know when I have the music/vocals right when they make me cry. It takes me back to that moment, that feeling when I wrote it. I’ll be putting a number of my healing era pieces up over time. Clearing the pipes, as it were. Thank you, my friend. Your words mean more than I can express
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🙃🖊🗡
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you so much. Life’s little stumbles…
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Such eloquent passion and imagery. This definitely moves the imagination and the spirit
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This was the beginning of my evolution. Thank you, my friend
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Terrific write, just be careful that pain doesn’t become pleasurable.
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏