Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
You hit hard.
And every blow a hit.
Don’t know which source you are getting from.
Seems like I’ll never tire of it.
Warm regards, Gus

There is a way you have of taking us inside, where we see and feel what you’re expressing. Not to the depth you do, I’m sure, but this one is potent. Beautifully aching. I can feel the pressure of the words trying to escape the heart, the chest 🧡

Well now, this is superb. Probably one of my favs of yours now. I’m interested in what inspired it. It has a great deal of weight being shifted from line to line, as if you can’t settle it in one spot. A heaviness lingering, perhaps.
Well done, Crims.

hello dearest poet I really enjoyed the style and subject matter here ❤️

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This write hits like a Mack truck my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Writes like this are quite difficult for the most of us. So few even try. Yet you did and you did it very well. The rhymes are solid and well thought out. Most of the cadence is kept moving fluidly. Along with an interesting storyline to boot.
Great job here. Your efforts paid off well.

incredibly penned…compelling. your imagery captivating,
you weave words with amazing fluidity. i too very much enjoyed your topic & style.
~ chantepleure

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend there are lots of layers in your work. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tight even down to the rhyme, to cool