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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
limericks
man from Austin
there once was a man from Austin
who said “I no longer drink. it’s a toxin”
he stood his ground
til the whiskey went down
and rewrote his whole fuckin doctrinesomeone I adore
there once was someone I adore
that said “we can’t do this anymore”
one drink one grin
and I’m right back in
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Read MoreThe studio on 4th Street was the place they needed to beHope & determination was in their minds, that they can change societyThey were considered the outcasts outside of their communitySongs being created in Greenwich Village that weren't so...
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I think everyone has their favorite time period. favorite line “In the evening, the beatniks and the long haired girls came too
Coffee shops heard their words”-
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Awesome! Thanks Fia..xo
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend I dig writes involving music. Cool photo, I knew instantly that was a young Robert Zimmerman. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comment Damian. Thank you!!
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Hoi hoi @Visions,
What a lovely write!
And – assuming that you took the inspiration off the photo – what a lovely prompt.I was taken back a bit when I saw the litter on the pavement. Let’s hope that that is remedied now.
If you’re a serious fan of Bob’s, you may be interested in other stuff than his music.
Paintings, train wagon, his record collection. I may be able to help you there.
If so, please send a PM or mail.
Not his own music, I must add.I think your post is a very valuable one.
If you’re American:
Thank you.
In all other cases:
Keep them coming please.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Hello Gus. Thank you so much for the generous feedback. And yes I’m American. Born & raised in NY.
Peace!
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Dear K,
Wonderful vibe. This piece had me thinking about each generation creating their own progressive ideas that will right the wrongs of the current one so to speak. But the 60’s…that generation was seriously like no other before, or after. Terrific write. H🌷
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I wasn’t alive yet in the 60’s, but damn, the youth had such piss & vinegar against the establishment. There was no choice but for the government to stop, look & listen. Thanks for the generous comment.
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Once again you succeeded and writing and Article as powerful as meaningful on an important chapter of music history, Artists, and especially musicians were most often the ones to kick off change of social and political rules and customs. The Beatles and their generation initiated a real big innovation.
This is an outstanding article my friend!-
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Thank you very much Elke.
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I believe I read this on WC. It’s just as good the second time reading it. Your photo cements the character of the poem. A snapshot in time I wish I could have experienced. Dylan was a poet with a guitar. Excellent writing.
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Thanks Tim. I wrote this originally on DUP. Appreciate the kind words and feedback.
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AHH, that’s where I probably saw it.
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Myself, born in 1963. Let’s just get back there.
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I hear ya! Let’s take a trip my friend. Thanks PAR.
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I can make great stuffed shells. Now I’m hungry. lol
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Let me know when your making Stuffed Shells. I’ll bring the desserts! Thanks Fia.
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Tastefully penned, Keith. I’m an Al Dente kinda guy as well. I love pasta and Italian food in general, but then again I really love Mexican food as well. Damn, I’m hungry now. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciate the generous comments.
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This is a very delicious poem, dear Keith!
I love Italian pasta – is the title an invitation?-
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Yes! Fly on over to me. We’ll have a huge Italian meal. Or I’ll fly to you and we can meet somewhere in Italy. Thanks my friend! xox
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Read MoreZak's yellow xanthoma was vile.Urine tears, slowly run quietly producing ooze.No money left.Keeping Jesus in his grips,Father Edwards divine cock bastardizing anally.
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Somethings just aren’t right in this world. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Nothing is right in the world. Enter at your own risk! Thanks man.
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Keith
I loved the way you used the alphabet in reverse to pen this piece.
Clever and worthy of a gold ⭐⭐⭐⭐-
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Hello Peter. i appreciate the generous comments here. Thanks!
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Letters make nothing of path’s quest.
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Valid point. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreAnd so it was, when the big pig had seized powerHe asked his followers to swear allegiance to himAnd the baldheaded big wigs - within the same hourKnelt and kissed his ring, without thinking, in a whim Though many animals...
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“Because some are more loyal than others. ” I think more are easier to break and make them follow than being loyal. I read animal farm. I like the use of the idea here
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Thank you Fia. Yes the loyal part also works. I just re-read sometime ago and I was watching a drum corps program that dealt with the same issue about being equal, so that theme stuck with me.
Always appreciate your comments and hope you have a wonderful new year.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Sabbath and Floyd I dig that. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
Yes, the pig theme from the music and the book (along with the image) just felt like they all tied together in a way.
Hope you have a great new year sir.
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Excellent. I think I know of this pig and his followers. There may be other interpretations, but I gravitate toward the one that has this swine in the highest of high positions. I shall try to eat more fish.
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Greetings Sam, yes you are exactly correct, let alone the latest comment made toward a woman by calling her just that. I think the majority of us feel this frustration (and anger), anxiety just to name a few.
Hope you have a great new year.
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Simply fantastic, Dru!
The meter may be a bit wonky, but your creative imagery, spot-on rhymes, and dancing rhythm make your efforts worthy a pound of Elvish Gold*
I really got a very good laugh out of your unique “Only You” sense-of-humor … especially, with L4 ‘n 5, Limerick 2. ; )))
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