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    honey

    in the between time of sighs and tearsof angry words and needed blisscommingling with lusta passionate abandon where the night hushesand all the spirits quickenas our desire burnssated fate, to indulge in youmy fantasy mixed with realitytoo potent to...

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    • Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜

      • hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕

    • Oh! This is very good, Brenda.

    • I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
      Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞

    • hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕

    • Powerful. You paint this scene well.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.

      John

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    it pains, on the morrow bleed

    contemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...

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    • Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
      Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
      You are loved.

      • hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️

    • Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.

      John

      • hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️

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    mirage

    strictly cautious of my soulit shines sometimes gathering stars to itthey covet the lovely shimmerdesiring to know me better my cover for a moment set aside my thoughts tumble forth from my lipsmetaphors for the sanctity of beingfor a...

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    To be Alive is to Resist

    To be alive is to resist  Every breath sacred  Every second a victory    The world weighs heavy on us all It weighs down hard upon The abandoned billions   Be happy you are human  And not a pig   To be alive is to fight  Against the lions Against the mustard...

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    • I am generally happy not to be a pig. Wouldn’t mind being a dog somedays, at least if I get to pick my owner but that’s probably asking a lot.

      Living is a constant choice but there will be more than enough time to rest and recuperate at the end for all of us.

      • I agree.
        I would rather be a cat than a dog. A cat can be free and domestic when it chooses. Dogs are bound to their owners for better or worse
        Thanks for reading.
        Regards James

    • are we not like pigs as they are stuck in a pig pen with their waste as we are stuck in our world with out waste…I agree to live is to fight I will not give up easily great write 💕

      • Thanks for reading.
        there is so much shit going on right now.
        The pigs above us have turned the world into a pig sty.
        Regards James

    • Poets aren’t giving up. WE have to keep fighting.
      I won’t give up even when I am dead…I swear I will not.
      I have been so angry lately and just can’t help to write it out.
      The lions are winning right now, but they will get their tails caught in the door…and be lead out.

      a necessary poem here.

      j.

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    invisible

    slowing down the mood, I take time to contemplate your absenceit haunts the feeling of love lostwe would never fit rightmy heart knows I don't fit with anyonemy thoughts linger, with a deep sighsecret sorrow I carry with methe...

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    • Very much enjoyed write from the off to the opposite end of the page .. I hope to check in more often as I learn how to navigate these stars .. Warmly, Neville 😎👍

      • hello dearest Neville good morning and welcome thank you graciousy for the love on this and look forward to get to know you through your poetry 💕

    • Dark and Misty emotions.
      A journey through sorrow.
      Regards
      James

      • hello dearest James thank you graciously for the love on this sorrow keeps me honest 💕

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