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Really sad piece and we could see this while reading, Sad Lady
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This is so very touching, Brenda.
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thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
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thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.
endless night confession
breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchangeyou were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
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I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
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Ha-hahhhh!
That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
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Nolan Bucsis wrote a new post
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Read MoreI've already fadedAway againInto the memoryOf someone else.And I wasn'tEven here to beginWith.Always somewhereElse.Always alone.
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Short,sweet and very 👍
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Hey, ‘somewhere else’ is a special place with significant hidden meanings. There’s only ever gonna be one you, pal….are any of us ever REALLY here? Lately I’ve taken to keeping a major distance between lonely and lonesome, the latter being the preferred state.
You’ve posted some deep essays on philosophy, politics, religion, warfare and other stuff on FB that I think would be post-worthy here, and maybe a more concentrated, less scatterbrained audience.
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Uh, so on that other poetry website I post on it turns out I wrote like 749 poems across a couple years, but I wrote half of them in six months. Anyway, right now I’m just compiling and editing them and gonna try to publish them on Amazon or something if that’s easy. So I’m focussing on that. I got like 11 books worth to do. So I’m doing that. I have some essays on substack, but they get no attention. Eh, a lot of those things on facebook I post are AI outputs, but yeah, I might.
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hello dearest poet I feel you on this I don’t even know myself anymore I hear a voice in my head and it doesn’t sound like me I disppear often where I go I don’t know… I felt this ❤️
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Light💕 wrote a new post
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Read MoreLeave me to bethe sprite of dawn,calling poets and monksto inspiring realms.The raw gemstonesinside mountains or over shoresechoes of primitivenessare refined in them.The flower on a snowed branchrefusing to grow upthe tree, steady in all seasonsrooted in belief.To bethe...
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Beautifully penned, Light. Into the book it belongs! Such a warm and lovely write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The warm and lovely is your review my dear friend💗 Thank You so much for this gift in this morning, I am really grateful 🤍 “into the book it belongs!” Beautiful words that will stick in my head for a while… ☺️
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Chère L.,
Hope this finds you well.If this isn’t a declaration of love, a poem to celebrate life? I don’t know what it is.
Love is!
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“declaration of love, a poem to celebrate life?” These sentences could be beautiful titles, new inspiring poems! Thank You for your very sweet review and inspiration my friend, I am grateful for your time and visit ☺️
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Chère L.,
If you find inspiration in what I wrote, please be my guest.
That is (just my opinion) exactly what a forum like this is about.Keep them (your poems) coming please.
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I did visit You and left You my print on one of your poems 😊
Keep yours coming too my friend ~
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I always feel a pang of pity for those who are unable to see it and fully appreciate it, especially those times when it’s poor pitiful me who can’t see it and not fully appreciate it, this inexplicable thing that drives us to observe & create. Thanks for the reminder!
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Good Day my friend~
We are all not perfect, and many times we miss an opportunity or a chance or even an inspiration, still don’t pitty yourself, as long as You are aware of if You will create your own opportunities and inspiration😊.Thank You for sharing your thoughts and for your kind visit.
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Chère L.,
I’ve been back for another eyeful of beauty.
Love the artwork too!
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Good Evening my French Friend 🌸
Thank You for giving my poem another visit, I’m grateful for your sweet kindness.
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Brilliant work.
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I appreciate your visit and kindness my friend, Thank You 😊
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A beautiful poem and make’ my eyes open wide.
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Thank You for the lovely words and kind visit my friend, I am grateful.
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Dearest Light💕 in my humble opinion, you could write poems & poetry for ever & a day and they would never be too long and nor would I tire of reading them .. No kidding .. Your friend, Me 😎💛🌻👍
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Dearest Neville🤍 You do know how to make this G girl warmly happy and grateful, your words and their sincerity mean so very much to me💕 thank You, thank You really and with all the beautiful good things✨🌺🌷🌸🌼🌻💐🌹🌿🌱🌲🍀☘️🪴✨
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian