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Read MoreI Kissed A Girl (many times)...I kissed a girl and I liked it!Stop right there! Hey, Katy Perry...there was no cherry chapstick!This is about me - not you!We met in the ladies room...you may have heard a story.I wear...
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I accidentally posted this same submission under A Squirrel. It was pointed out to me and after figuring out how to edit – the right one is up now.
I get loopy sometimes. I keep copies and cut and paste. It went bonkers, but it is corrected.
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Read MoreCancer:That verminous dreg of death! A maulerwho sucker-punches, spars,and destroyswith body blowsits challenger's ghostly form. Even money—unable to go the distancewith all its supremacy—gets outwittedand KO'd. With undefeated form,Cancer prevails far too often. Life's referee of remaining daysstands over another challengerand vigorously counts...
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Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.
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Thank you, Thomas.
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hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕
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Thanks very much, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate your comment, Damian. Thanks.
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Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.
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Thanks very much, Peter.
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Read Morea predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...
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I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.
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hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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U got me forever like it or not 😝😜🤪
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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good evening dearest Thomas thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕
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Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo
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hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful Mary I was watching Wednesday today on Netflix when this poem came to mind I’m happy you liked it I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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I love Wednesday!! Thoroughly enjoyed this gothic write:).
There is only one reason to unsheathe a sword! To bring the carnage!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina ahh yes carnage I guess in this write I was going for a willing sacrifice but carnage there would be lol I love your comment thank you and p,s. I love Wednesday too I feel like I was born in the wrong family sometimes 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. This is an incredible dark write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIf I don't buy you roses If I don't buy you roses Don't bother asking whyTheir life spans but a momentCompared to you and I. Their petal's scented pleasuresMay soothe a troubled soulYet what you've done for me loveso few have...
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Two incredible poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian. 🙂
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That first stanza hit. I love flowers but they die, and I feel bad to see them go. Beautifully written.
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Thanks for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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Beautiful work, Tim. Powerhouse.
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Thank you Thomas. 🙂
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You’re amazing with your dialogue. Always enjoy your writing.