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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS are now friends
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Read MoreIn a bar's outdoor beer garden,patrons mingle, talk politics,and eat sausagewhile downing beerbeneath an old oak's shade. Among them standsa sultry young woman,accustomed to turning headswherever she goes. Beside her mother,she surveys the crowd,catching the familiar glancesof men who notice her. Then,...
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I’m glad you liked it, Fia. Thanks. 🙂
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dearest Tim I hate women like that money grubbers trading their looks for cash prostitutes great write ❤️
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Thanks very much for the comment, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write that speaks some truth my friend. Some marriages are more like business arrangements these days. Cold and transactional it would seem. Just my two cents brother. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for your thoughts, Damian. Always a pleasure to see you on my page.
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Read MoreThe Captain was a cripple, patched o’er one o’ his black eyes, But swaggered still and strutted as he spoke:“We’re going after treasure, lads, -- a worthy pirates’ prize!” And gave his fearsome beard a hearty stroke. ...
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Once a pirate always a pirate no mater what happens. Nice:)
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Aaaargh!
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I had a dream that you wrote an incredible review of this piece, the nicest I’ve ever received from such an astute and credentialed writer and teacher as yourself.
Then I awoke to find it was not a dream after all. The review was still here. I have to say I am stunned, Richard. Truly, actually stunned. Thank you.
Oh, and I clicked the link you provided and read the first two pieces, and I must say, “Wow! Now THAT’S talent. I especially liked, “Rita Lee.” My kind of gal!
Thank you, Richard.
FD
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I think I had a cap’n like that once. A right salty tale, Daddy-O!
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Go your own way Fia
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Thank you, Peter;))
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This portrays power and the ability to choose on her own terms. A devilish poem, Fia, 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write as always my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;)
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Read MoreI wait and allow you to unfold Everything is rushed Nothing is savored Wait until the moment The exact moment When a tremor Signals It is time Time to allow you To unfurl like A deadly flower You tempt me To lean over Convince me that You are ready Still… Something… Is held back I’ll wait
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hello beautiful Fia this is very passionately seductive ❤️
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Hi Crimsin. thank you :))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian😁
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Anticipation causes as many heart attacks as does the activity! The pressure verses the release can be extremely volatile!
Unless of course I’m so reading into this write the wrong way? NOT! lol
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Haha this is a good one and I like how you end it with the old saying.