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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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hello lovely poetess this is very interesting great write 💕
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Hello Crimsin. Thank you for the feedback.
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I liked this.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂
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You’re very good a setting up intrigue and suspense
Naaj
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Thank you a lot dear.
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My pleasure – dear 💖
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I love reading your unique and fearless poems Ms A
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You spoil me with your words and I like it a lot. 🙂
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Good. You deserve this spoilage. It’s sweet though. 😉
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Yes it is sweet.
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🙂
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Read MoreInspired by: Blink-182 – Gohttps://youtu.be/YS1FvpS8tL8?si=ffTn33M7DeFRxbgQyou say you won't leave because it's love but that ain't love I think it's fucked he treats you like a piece of crap gave him all your cash for he could go out drinking with friends when you speak up he...
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Powerful
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Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Holy Damn, Nick. That’s good.
(Take the ‘e’ off your ‘grab’)
I love the refrain. It emphasizes urgency. I like the conversational tone, the second person narrative… the pleading.
This is a gut-wrenching piece, and I can feel it to the core.
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Thanks for the read. Abuse is something that doesn’t get enough notice. I know I grew up around it as well as many friends and family. I think it’s always good to put a light on that issue.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Can feel the emotion in your words, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, friend. The read is very much appreciated.
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Read Morewould you be there if you found out I wasn't that rich? I grew up poor had to fight for what I got I'll never be the one with a lot of cash but what I have, I earned is that worth something to you? would...
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What I love about this piece is emotional intimacy… the shit you talk about at the end of a weekend vacation before Monday morning rolls around and bites you in the butt. You’re looking out over the horizon just wondering what tomorrow will bring, and it’s time to get real about where we are going. Are you with me or not? Am I really what you want? You brace yourself and pray for plain English after laying out your limitations.
I feel the anxiety and sense the reassurance. It’s well written, Nick.
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I usually tell people that love takes a lot of hell to get to heaven. You have to be willing to go through that with that person. And I definitely have the experience.
Thanks for the read, friend.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the read. It’s very much appreciated.
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo