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Read MoreLooking in, looking outtell me, what love’s aboutCounting all the stars, missing onewhere is it, where’s it goneAnd you know I miss youit’s all I do, think of youremembering your touch, gentle windcoming and going, looking inLooking out, towards...
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The ending, I changed at the last minute, and you pictured it perfectly. Thanks for letting me know that it hits.
And you keep kicking butt!
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It’s just creative writing Brenda, I promise! I try to mix up the subjects and such. I don’t want to be too predictable!
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Hello Tim!
This is not current event material. I’m mixing up my subject matter here and there, so as not to be too typical, yaknow?
Sometimes I read something and it inspires me to write my own thing from it. I get motivated by reading! -
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Thanks Damian. Me and Del are good! I just like to take my writing in different directions, like most of us do. I’m always learning and adapting, I hope.
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But you are in my head when I write. When are you NOT in my head? LOL. I was going back and forth on this one, as far as how lyrical to make it. I forget what song I was listening to, that got me going on it. But eh, I’m leaving it as is for a bit. You know me!
And you know that I love you too babydoll. Smooch!
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Read MoreRopity RasidyHopalong CassidyBad guys would faint if heReached to his hip! They grew maniacally,HypochondriacallyIll, 'cause he fought with aBlack leather whip!
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this is interesting… love the rhythm of it
im also checking to see if you are receiving this comment… please confirm
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Got it, And Thanks, Sam.
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I CU
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I got it, Sam, but this is my third try to confirm it.
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Yeah, I figured it out, Richard. My computer and I are having a fight right now over who/what/which of us can be more stupid. I think I’m winning — though, if Elvis (my computer) doesn’t buck up, I may have to set it on fire.
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confirmed
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Hopefully it works this time (I’ve changed my anti-virus app. Yest I see your comment!
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Yes, I got it. But I am still having problems leaving reviews and messages. I hope you receive this.
Thank you.
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Go your own way Fia
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Thank you, Peter;))
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This portrays power and the ability to choose on her own terms. A devilish poem, Fia, 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write as always my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;)
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You feel the weight of sadness in this one. pretend it is not a knock at a window. Shows how alone you felt