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Read MoreYour time has come young personmuch sooner than you thoughtrelease your mouth from your mother's nipplethere's a lesson here to be taught you seek instant gratificationand vain internet validation I'm a forward thinking manyes, a problem solvercan you put your phone...
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I did. That’s for another day. Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreThe cuckold generationtide-pod guzzling snowflakesbegging to be micro-chippedbegging to be numbered Xenophobic and neuroticdisconnected and psychoticreprogrammed and roboticGeneration Zero seeking- individual identitytrapped- in a surrogate reality no social skillsno common sense Easily offendedlooking to accusebegging for defensefrom genuine experiencestampede of the sheepmarch to...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Damn, this is brutally honest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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These generations that came after us, are self absorbed in their own illusions. To much technology. It is brutally honest. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words hit with the might of a sledgehammer my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here it’s felt deeply ❤️
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas I was reading your poem and realizing my drug use puts me in danger much like your poem I would never intentionally kill myself but accidental could happen it’s sobering ❤️
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This shows your talent as a writer and very good.
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thank you dearest Adagio I was drawing on my days in the past and my current addictions ❤️
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hello dearest poet this was from a time in my life I was taking about twenty sleeping pills at a time not realizing that could kill me as I was writing this I thought I would never kill myself intentionally but then I remembered my behavior and how a lot of famous people who have died unitentionally it was sobering thank you for being thoughtful ❤️
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you are rude and thoughtless…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you my friend ❤️
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Chère C.,
You hit hard.
And every blow a hit.
Don’t know which source you are getting from.
Seems like I’ll never tire of it.
Warm regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus thank you for you interest I draw from the illusive thing called love ❤️
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There is a way you have of taking us inside, where we see and feel what you’re expressing. Not to the depth you do, I’m sure, but this one is potent. Beautifully aching. I can feel the pressure of the words trying to escape the heart, the chest 🧡
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thank you beautiful Willow you feel so deeply I can tell by your comment thank you lovely soul ❤️
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Well now, this is superb. Probably one of my favs of yours now. I’m interested in what inspired it. It has a great deal of weight being shifted from line to line, as if you can’t settle it in one spot. A heaviness lingering, perhaps.
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hello dearest Styxian it is a heaviness within me for all the beings I loved and let down… sometimes I feel I should never been given the chance to fail someone so utterly thank you for your beautiful thoughts ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. At least your balanced my friend, if I remember right you even went after your own generation in a write you posted on DUP. lol. No one is safe from your wrath. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian