Yes, you are a diamond. I like how you put this together to show that you are.

Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. A diamond in the rough so to speak kinda vibe. Appreciate you.

Damian

Marvelous…

Wonderful wordplay…

Perfect ending…

Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend, also thanks for the history. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great piece Peter. Well researched and enlightening.

This is one outstanding write Peter. Well said and very well detailed.

This is quietly heartbreaking and beautifully observed—love and life in parallel lines.

Such good writing Peter. So often, couples won’t acknowledge the other until one day there’s one less partner to walk through life with. Death hits hard and the regret of not sharing openly the feelings that still linger underneath.

Your poem narrates characters in a story of their lives. They live through your words. This is so well done.

Thank you Thomas and Tim for your thoughtful and kind remarks.
I share most of my writing with anyone other than my wife.I wonder how much great poets of the past shared works with their partners.

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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. This is amazing storytelling at its finest. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is sad and the description of how things even though you are doing what you must day to day you forget that the partner must be taking care of just like everyone and everything else

This is probably the way it is for most older couples. Yet always at least parallel, not veering away. Close enough for a hand to hold, to acknowledge the other. I envy that, to have someday. Just to know I am not ever really alone. As bittersweet as it can seem, it is also a reward unto itself. That commitment to stay so near, even if it seems a bit far at times. Hearts have a way…
Wonderful write. Poignant and pin-point.

Beautifully dark.
I hear you.
Regards
James

Powerfully penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks James and Damian for the nice comments.

Deep, dark and authentic. Great work here Peter.

It seems that the more favorable holiday has shifted to thanks giving.

Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Dear P,

I found quite a bit of dark humor very relatable in this write. I really appreciated this point of view. The loneliness and pushed commercialism can be overwhelming and sad. Terrific write. H🌷