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      Really!!

      Poetry is painting with words. Painting is poetry without them. Lust is poetry with bodies. Poetry is lust without them. I wonder if someone else has thought of this.

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      Weeping Wednesday

      It’s just another shitty day in paradise.The sky is a uniform grey,not the ominous kind, but soft and familiar, like my grandmother’s hair. A fine rain drifts down, blown every which way by a world weary wind. Somewhere, birds...

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      • hi Benny it appears are minds are on similar wavelengths I don’t like to write about war but the suffering is on my mind like I can feel their pain on my own body…when will people realize this fact? great write 💕

      • You and crimsin’s, writes are very powerful tonight. You’re right it is not going to be alright.

      • We have a lot to be thankful for, Benny.
        I think you’re a hero quietly relaxing in your garden
        cape floating around your neck
        in the breeze

        • As a nurse, you’re the hero.
          I’ll settle for being a mote in the eye of whoever created whole shebang.
          Thanks for the lovely comment.😘

      • Powerfully penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, phenomenal imagery. Never thought I’d see such sad days. Spot On. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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      Words

      Love dries up when words go walkingtaking more than just the talking.Affection follows in pursuitof missing words that leaves both mute.Another home another pairspit out words without a care.Things get thrown,fists get raisedlove lies bleeding,both are crazed.When a fist...

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      Me first.

      I want to die before you so I won't miss your faults or risk loving them even more.   What a selfish man you married.  

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      • That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.

      • I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅

      • hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕

      • This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.

    • AI doesn't wonder.

      The dawn sky is brightening as the morning star fadesThe steam from my morning tea risesfogging the window that i stare throughAnd I wonder.I wonder about mankind Then realise in the word itselfIs the answerMan is rarely kind.I wonder...

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