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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen they beganThey held handsThey smiledThey illuminated the sky Chairs were heldGiggles slipped freelyAnd the thought ofWhat base is a good one for this date Time goes byRings were boughtVows were saidIn laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr....
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Thank you cuz. I am a Star Trek fan lol:))
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“Would you ever want the loop to end?“
That’s a great, almost philosophical question. Some people like to escape a loop because they only see the endless repetition of the same actions. To me it holds the chance to experience new aspects of old routines on the basis of familiar facts. It’s adventurous and reliable at the same time.
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Thank you Sappho;))
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I recently had a co worker/friend who lost her husband. He was a young guy too. I read this feeling like you could have wrote this for them, and my heart breaks all over. Thank you for this sad beautiful read.
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Thank you Brandon;))
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Thank you Angel Louise;))
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Powerful and poignant. Great write.
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Thank you Thomas;))
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Wow a lot of times if the love and bond is that strong it would be hard to live without them.
I know a friend who recently past a few months after because he couldn’t live without his beloved wife.Powerful great write
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That does happen. If the bond is that strong. thank you Lizz:))
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Finding a soul mate is hard enough in a lifetime but then losing them?
Yes, that ending line does beg the question many people would agree to.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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Read MoreA Song To Myself “just let it be, let it go why don’t you be you and I’ll be me….” James Bay A December moon rose with bitterness, a sea...
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This is so beautiful. You still write to her.
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Yes, I still write. When we first met back in college, I began writing her love poems. One of her girlfriends asked me if I would always write her poetry and I told her and the woman I would marry, “I will always write you poetry”. But I stopped, “life” was my excuse. We did not last (5 years total), not because of the poetry, but we began to see life differently and she got a boyfriend instead of us trying to fix things. But, always writing her poetry became a metaphor for my mistakes in our relationship, the things that I did wrong and contributed to our splitting up. I was more the “typical man” and had to learn the hard way to consciously give that shit up. I have believed that it has been this learning process about patriarchy that has made me more humane and a better human being. So yes, I still write her poetry because I never want to forget and want to continue seeing women with mutual respect and equality, as full human beings. Thank you Fia for reading and your kind words.
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I just finished reading this and wow. It is so moving.
Squeezes my heart while reading.
And reading your reply to Fia made this piece even more special.
I feel very lucky to have read this today. It’s fragile and beautiful all at the same time.
Can’t say enough about it:)
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Thank you, Adelphina. I really appreciate your comment and happy you found it moving. I often think about her, how she’s doing, is she happy, wondering how her life has been. She has always held a piece of my heart. Thanks again, I hope you are well Adelphina.
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
MaryJane’s Last Dance
It was day 23 of Poetry Month
when you walked through the door,
And I said,
“Oh my, my. Oh hell yes”
as my eyes landed on
that party dress;
thigh high red with
a side slit stare, and
I was pulled into your sway.
MaryJane delights
played in my mind,
like how smoke and fog
swirled in kaleidoscope air,
and we be…Read More4 Comments-
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We dance in those empty spaces. (That’s the best memory ) Very nicely done
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Thank you Fia, your comment is appreciated muchly
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I read “side slit stare” and the scene was set, the mood and everything that followed owned the room!
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That dress!! I knew I was in big trouble….lol ;0)
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Hello Me
It has been a while
You reached a plateau
traveling many milesWhat you failed to do
Is see what is occurring around youOr you’re choosing not
Not to see
Not to hear
Not to “oh my” share??Me this can not be
Your voice and thoughts need..need..To be set free
Free from the confines
Of societies vines…Read More2 Comments-
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Hello you, it’s just me. ;0) pretty cool poem Fia.
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Thank you so much;))
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I feel you on this lovely Fia I used to clam up like that when my kooky thoughts would come but I can’t hold them anymore…be yourself lady we will love you ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I will keep being me;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. It feels like inner dialogue to me, you and your subconscious kinda vibe. Nicely done as always. I can relate.. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, Yeah, it is inner dialogue. Sometimes I need to set myself straight. lol
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These conversations with self are some of the best. I enjoyed the way this one wove the reader into it
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Thank you willow. Yeah, sometimes sitting and just think things through of what happened or what should happen. Helps.
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This is excellent. It had some rhyme and rhythm.
Nothing felt forced at all.
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Thank you, I just let whatever I was thinking come out. thank you;))
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Sometimes its necessary to pause, reflect and take inventory. I like the honesty because we do tend to lose sight for a while until we become more aware of ourselves.
Nicely done.
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Dig the Star Trek reference by the way. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian