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“16 Going On 75…”

A Poem by Chris

There’s a lot of nights in our days…

“16 Going On 75…”

 

Hand on-the-knob

“16 Going On 75…”
A Poem by Chris
” There’s a lot of nights in our days. “
There’s a lot of nights in our days…

“16 Going On 75…”

 

Hand on-the-knob

slowly, slowly-turning…

Is it snow-layered vision,

Ice speckled and sparkling ‘scape, or

Rain-swept and harried-puddled view…

that awaits

beyond…

the ever-so-slowly opening eyes?

 

…Edge-to-edge… barren ‘scape

…a nothingness.

 

It’s still winter’s aerie.

I know…

I KNOW…

 

But – no prominence… no draw.

 

Slo-cold-chill insinuates

lovingly-caresses

moves …crawls… Inveigles into

my conscious thoughts.

 

I hear – but do I?

or is it time’s echoes of a distant night’s train

and emptiness

coupled to asphalt whispers from wheels

…turning… meandering…

 

Remembering?

…forgetting…

 

Palpable dark…

sitting up… am I?

or not…

 

Feeling – not feeling,

…I don’t know.

 

Hearing my breath

Hearing

my… is it MY

IS IT…

 

Move …move – can’t…CAN’T…

Am, am…

Light-on!

 

Soaked in sweat,

blanket, sheet tightly wrapping half my body.

Deep, deep breaths

 

“…I miss you…”

 

Chris

 

 

© 2025 Chris

slowly, slowly-turning…

Is it snow-layered vision,

Ice speckled and sparkling ‘scape, or

Rain-swept and harried-puddled view…

that awaits

beyond…

the ever-so-slowly opening eyes?

 

…Edge-to-edge… barren ‘scape

…a nothingness.

 

It’s still winter’s aerie.

I know…

I KNOW…

 

But – no prominence… no draw.

 

Slo-cold-chill insinuates

lovingly-caresses

moves …crawls… Inveigles into

my conscious thoughts.

 

I hear – but do I?

or is it time’s echoes of a distant night’s train

and emptiness

coupled to asphalt whispers from wheels

…turning… meandering…

 

Remembering?

…forgetting…

 

Palpable dark…

sitting up… am I?

or not…

 

Feeling – not feeling,

…I don’t know.

 

Hearing my breath

Hearing

my… is it MY

IS IT…

 

Move …move – can’t…CAN’T…

Am, am…

Light-on!

 

Soaked in sweat,

blanket, sheet tightly wrapping half my body.

Deep, deep breaths

 

“…I miss you…”

 

Chris

 

 

© 2025 Chris

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