Hello Me,
It has been awhile
You reached a plateau
traveling many miles
What you failed to do
Is see what is occurring around you
Or you’re choosing not
Not to see
Not to hear
Not to “oh my” share??
Me this can not be
Your voice and thoughts need..need..
To be set free
Free from the confines
Of societies vines
Wrapped around your throat
Restricting the word
Your word
Oh, dear me
What can I say
To convince you
That it’s you not me they want today
Return to the beginning
Since you are at your end
When you reached your next plateau
Come and let’s talk again my friend
I feel you on this lovely Fia I used to clam up like that when my kooky thoughts would come but I can’t hold them anymore…be yourself lady we will love you ❤️
Thank you Crimsin. I will keep being me;))
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. It feels like inner dialogue to me, you and your subconscious kinda vibe. Nicely done as always. I can relate.. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
Thank you Damian, Yeah, it is inner dialogue. Sometimes I need to set myself straight. lol
These conversations with self are some of the best. I enjoyed the way this one wove the reader into it
Thank you willow. Yeah, sometimes sitting and just think things through of what happened or what should happen. Helps.
This is excellent. It had some rhyme and rhythm.
Nothing felt forced at all.
Great stream of consciousness amiga:)
Thank you, I just let whatever I was thinking come out. thank you;))
Sometimes its necessary to pause, reflect and take inventory. I like the honesty because we do tend to lose sight for a while until we become more aware of ourselves.
Nicely done.