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Read MoreBiased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities False sincerity acted out in full pantomime Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death Programmed from a young...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Echo. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:
Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey
That is gold, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. It ranks high as one of my best in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Raw and gritty. Love it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.
Great write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He did get some of it spot on, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love your raw writing man ❤️🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Poe. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like the flow of this and the tenderness of it.
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Thank you my dear.
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Beautifully penned, PAR. A great light airy kinda write my friend. Almost sounds like I’m describing a wine tasting competition. lol. Incredible as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More of a name tasting. Names have incredible flavours.
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Love the concept PAR. Cool piece with some awesome imagery.
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Obrigado, meu amigo! ❤
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Read MoreAre you ever anxious about the grocery store? I doubt you go outside thinking maybe I'll see her today Do you think about how your face would look when you see me? My doubt cycles over and over... a spiritual shoe in...
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Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.
We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.
Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.
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The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.
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Read MoreThere's always that person that is shrouded in maybes Of missed moments, shared glances Maybe even stolen kisses and touches Ambivalence lacing that the purest longing sorrow It's a wretched thing to get close to Everest And just end up with your heart as...
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Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.
I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.
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Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
Nicely penned.
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Love this… great job Damion…