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Read MoreI see you without a voice, a breath suspended between shadows.Your silence lingers, folded into the corners of my gaze, pressed against the glass of a world that refuses to listen. Light bends around your absence, whispers dissolve into the...
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Thank you my dearest friend. So glad to get your comments! Kisses.
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Incredible piece Paulo.
“Light bends around your absence”
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Thank you very much 🙏.
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Great title. Infectious writing with a fragile overtone. Awesome!!
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Thanks Keith. ❤
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Read MoreMy shadow has left out of boredom.Time yawns when I enter a room. I am the world's most boring man. Rivers flow up hill to avoid me,and plants fake their own demise. I am the world's most boring man...at least to you. I...
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Read MoreI was a shy awkward kid, from about 4th grade to high school. I was never popular, to some I probably wasn’t recognized at all. Except, to be picked on by bullies who take pleasure in that sort of...
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I like the angry box. You are right it is important to let out the rage, bottled up is a bomb ready to be set off. Good write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. It is very important indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful. Writing is cethartic. You nailed it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I figured you could relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Despite wildly different backgrounds & life stories, I somehow think you & I have similar spirits. Creation is a beautiful outlet & when we’re in pain, all we want to do is create beauty to soothe the wounds. And if you were anything like I was, secretly hoping one day you’d be famous & show those douche canoes. 😂 You, my friend, are a rockstar!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I have thought that as well, we’re what I call Kindred Spirts. Fancy talk for we kinda think alike, I feel that too. I’m the most popular rockstar that never made it I know of. lol. I’ve made it in my own way, just not the traditional way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back!
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For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par
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Thank you my dear.
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. This was simply an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian