I see you without a voice,
a breath suspended between shadows.
Your silence lingers,
folded into the corners of my gaze,
pressed against the glass
of a world that refuses to listen.
Light bends around your absence,
whispers dissolve into the quiet,
and still—inside my eyes— your silence echoes,
louder than sound.
Once more,
echoes bounce between us.
I breathe in your absence,
watching shadows fold into the quiet.
Your silence is weightless,
yet it presses against my skin,
a whisper unraveling between the spaces
where words once lived.
Inside my eyes, your silence hums,
soft, steady— a language only I can hear.
As a Haiku…
Silent eyes reflect,
whispers linger in the dusk,
echoes fade to dust.
Brilliantly penned, PAR. This was simply an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
❤
Okay, first of all, that’s a killer title.
Second of all, whaaaat?!
You summed up a brilliant poem with a brilliant haiku? Who are you???!!!
(genuflecting)
Seriously. This is amazing, PAR.
Thank you my dearest friend. So glad to get your comments! Kisses.
Incredible piece Paulo.
“Light bends around your absence”
Love it.
Thank you very much 🙏.
Great title. Infectious writing with a fragile overtone. Awesome!!
Thanks Keith. ❤