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    From inside my panties

    The house is still silent.My first thought is the last thing you said, and it haunts me all night. I know I’ll wake up aching for release, thinking about comforting your cock with my liquid aching. Everything yearns for...

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    • Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Crisp imagery as well. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Appreciate you too, DD. I mean, I do love me some me, so the passion is authentic.
        🙂

    • You’re waiting for the story to end. Oh my, this story is hot, it should not end.

      • I mean, a girl can only lay in bed rubbing one out so long before she has to go be part of the world…. but thank you Fia!

    • It sizzles with a touch of noir in one’s skivvies! I like it, Betty.

    • Most erotica is as sexy as cold vomit, cliche and only appreciated by the sleaze pigs. You have this remarkable ability to reach inside the male mind and to deconstruct feral desires. It’s not something which usually moves me, but between my ankles and hips, your words always leave a tattoo. Great scribbling Boo.

      You may not remember the fake Satanic Slut fake profile on DU? It was actually a gay male friend of mine. So outlandish and utterly bizarre, it was blatantly obvious a fake. And yet his inbox was awash with dribbling males. There’s another similar. Is there a moral to that? Probably just be aware of sad little men.

      Rob x

      • You damn me with false praise, dear Rob.

        More please?

        I feel like men don’t really stand a chance against me, sad or real or otherwise. You know?

        Thank you my friend. I fucking love and appreciate you.

    • Well, seems like you had a rough morning. Not!
      As Ghosteen said, most adult poetry/prose is simply amateur porn. It takes an actual thought process to make it appealing. We use our brains too, when we have sex of any kind. So when someone can step it up to being something relatable, achievable even, for us all, then that means its good writing. So bravo to ya, for making it real for the reader.

    • Thank you my brother. The brain is the biggest sex organ, and I love that you pointed that out.

      Thank you for the commentary. I absolutely adore you, and your opinion always matters.

    • Oh my. Oh my my my! Well hello Betty!
      This was quite the experience to read! That sweet spot of a dream and feeling completely immersed.
      Having those fantasies or dreams gets the heart going amiga. This takes vivid cardio exercise to another level.
      I felt the frustration of the alarm. Noooooo!

      And I love that bright smile of yours- after reading this I see why! Hahaha. No one does this better than you!

      I’m so happy to see ya posted:)

      • Hey lovely one! Thank you for the kind words.
        Yeah, fuck the alarm, like, why does it always go off right… then?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

        It’s good to be posting. I’m not sure where I’m going. Maybe longer erotica in the future. For now just reposting the few prose erotic pieces I had from in the day. Thank you for being here supporting my pervert brain! LOVE YOU GIRL!

    • Oh those 9 minutes of the snooze button…
      So I almost read this while at work but upon reading the title, I opted to come back at a later time and I’m glad I did (I can’t risk people walking up behind me while read this kind of work, clutching my pearls).
      Amazing. It’s every man’s fantasy and daydream, the peak of sexuality and longing wrapped up in such a hot scenario.
      Now I should go for a run to get my heart going again.

    • Wally, that would have been a disaster! I’m glad you avoided the pearl clutching my friend.
      You know I’m pro run for everything. So run your ASS off! Glad to have helped with your cardio, sweet friend.

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    Inking Ink 3 - an interview with Drieks

    Tonight, I am interviewing, Drieks, who I find to be an accomplished artist who has reached the banks of The Avalon. Her dark side amazes me, and I am no stranger to the world of psychological horror. I cut my...

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    There was a silent wind watching you, and I walked slowly to kiss you. There was a desire happening in the air, as if time were sweetly coming to touch you.   There was a growing glow in the background, and I saw, deeply, your...

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