Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.

I agree with Thomas. This vivid. So vivid I can see this with my eyes closed.
In the dark….
You can feel it too..
Very nice piece.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest poet dangerously sexy I can taste the headiness 💕

Beautifully haunting

Truth, Ambjr. Beautifully penned my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

The need to belong somewhere is strong. Very well expressed. Great piece.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! This is an absolutely incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest poet this is very passionate I can relate people need to just accept people as they are…

I feel that this is a good rendition of domination
When you have a partner who is willing, then the scene is epic
That being said for those of you who do not like the wording remember it’s in the moment, shit gets real. (I’m getting hot here)
Favorite lines
You don’t have to say what you want, I can read it
The whole fourth stanza 

To a gasp is the only sound that you have to give
That did me in. Yep, going to have a glass of ice water now.

just gonna pass you a towel. clean yourself up. thanks

thanks?