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Read Moretell me i’m nothina mess stitched from bruisesa walkin disasterthat drags the world downevery step a fractureevery breath a crack tell me i deserveall of the shitthat’s rained on mesince the beginninlike hail against skinlike fists pressedcollidin with a facethat...
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hello dearest poet this is felt deeply but you are not a monster monsters don’t feel that much ❤️
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Tremendous work.
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“the noise after
was louder than him
and it hasn’t stopped since”
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Superb work.
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Omg, the number of times I’ve written about this very thing & never did it the justice you did…I so relate…
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nah. I’ve read plenty of your poems to know you would’ve done it justice. thanks willow
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. First off, I relate. Amazing write my friend, the imagery and wordplay is phenomenal. You can only compartmentalize so many overrunning thoughts, I speak from experience. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know you get it man. appreciate it
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Read Moreit doesn’t fadethe achenot in silencenot in distancenot in the hours I pretend to fill with other thingsit keeps circlin backa want carved into mea fever that burns clean thru and I want youin the way hunger becomes pulsein the...
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Maybe, I should rename this day Sizzling Sunday. I mean…hot
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maybe so. see if we can keep it goin today.
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Passionately penned, Ambjr. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you Damian
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Powerful and passionate.
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thanks Thomas
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Oh oh oh…you should see me over here freaking a twinkie!! This was…so absolutely perfect. The passion, the honesty…damn. I would double reading list, if I could! 🔥🙌🔥
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freakin a twinkie…nice. lol. glad it hit ya like that. thanks
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Over and over, ooouuff !
I promised not to throw myself into the lakes of your words only to come out in flames, lol, hence my last comment.
Soon, I’ll keep my babbling within and endure the beauty of the feeling, but ” !!! “
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hello dearest poet I don’t know why people are so cruel especially a mother me I didn’t have one who stuck around as for God Jacob have I loved and Esau has he hated even while in the womb why who knows… great write 💕
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thank you crimsin
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This left me with so many emotions. Breathless because I was holding it when I read it
Tears because I understand how being the first is not always being the best. Just a trial run
Angry…don’t be a fucking mother if you can not handle the life you brought in to the World -
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This is an onslaught on all the senses, felt these venom soaked words in my bloodstream my friend. Fucking ferocious write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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much appreciated
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