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    Feeling The Burn

    The Earth has always had a planShe shifts continents like furniturestirs storms in her sleepstarts over when she feels like itShe doesn’t need permissionShe doesn’t need usNo, we didn’t cause all thisThe Earth has her own cyclesher own rhythmShe...

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    • Powerfully penned, Zazzles. Reminds me of an old George Carlin bit, when it comes to shaking us off like a bad case of fleas. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Sorry it took so long to reply back to you Damian. Yeah I remember that skit from George Colin. He was one of the greatest.
        Thank you for visiting my friend
        Jackie xo

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    Why Viscous?

    Your soul has withered, your conscience dead, your eyes don't cry, you have a heart of ice, your face so pale, so clammy everywhere, every word you utter to me filled with vulgarity... gives me violent shivers...   Why vicious?   You stole my heart and never gave it back, still you try...

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    facets

    sinister plea I am aborted needempty in the hollowness of soulburning with the desire to be knownaching rebellion, sacred trustto be cast outfalling through the dark I screammy heart fails and I turn palemy spirit sinks and I think...

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    • Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
      The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
      “secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
      “your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)

      Just an amazing piece of work, girl.

      • hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕

    • Amazing piece Crimsin!
      Razor sharp ink.

    • You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!

      Naaj

      • hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕

    • Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

      • hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕

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    apology

    lingers the sadness and I wonder when it will endthe blueness of feeling overwhelms my soul tries to conceal the griefbut it is emerging in my day and in my writingin the form of depressionmy days are altered and...

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    • No apologies necessary, girl. This is what writing is for. Your catharsis. Hand over your feelings. The piece is strong and moving.

      Meg

      • hello lovely Meg thank you graciously it is difficult because my feelings seem to confront me when I write there is no hiding from them… I deeply appreciate your understanding and willingness to listen my name is Brenda 💕

    • hello dearest Will thank you for the good advise I want to get past this feeling in my life and in my writing…sometimes I think I here my son asking me ma, what are you doing when I am unkind to myself…still I am grateful I had time with my son to be close to him before he died… I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕

    • Do whatever you need to do to survive…..write,cry,complain,run naked trough the streets if you have to…….just survive.

      Take care and you have friends here that care even if from the other side of the earth.

      • hello Peter good morning thank you for an understanding advise and a comment that made me smile 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. No apologies are needed, you grieve as long as you need to my friend. You’re working through your thoughts and emotions, writing is your therapy right now. I’m supportive because I also use my writing as therapy, I think it’s what writers do. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you dearest Damian for being so supportive and understanding I appreciate you 💕

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