sinister plea I am aborted need
empty in the hollowness of soul
burning with the desire to be known
aching rebellion, sacred trust
to be cast out
falling through the dark I scream
my heart fails and I turn pale
my spirit sinks and I think that's it for me
folly of understanding I'm just not getting it
sinful redemption, love found in your arms
secreting the nights away
my thoughts covet your beauty
alone in trust
my shaken faith, trembles
and I succumb to the feelings I'm trying to avoid
your truth my undoing
you love me no doubt
but my hurt won't allow
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)
Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
Amazing piece Crimsin!
Razor sharp ink.
hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕