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Nicely done, Adel. You and Gus did an amazing job on this song. Love the trippy effect on the chorus, I’m assuming with reverb.. You got a better voice than I do. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Chère A.,
Hope this finds you well?!You see, it’s not half as scary as you may have thought I guess.
There’s a first time for all fun and harmless things, and this is such a thing. Kicking some ideas around with a very happy sounding outcome!I simply loved the whole process. I am grateful for you having done this coop with me. And extra grateful for children who support the quirkies of their parents. And a very nice touch of voice doubling on the chorus.
I love it from the first to the last second! Until we’ll meet again… electronically (to prevent gossip – there’s not a first for everything I think). Wish your first song published Tuesday will sound as happy as your voice.
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Well, darn. I love how you are branching out in so many directions creatively. And yes, I smile every time you serenade me with this song. (hey thats what you called it!). Props to Gus and Ricky for their help. keep in mind that this is your first try at something like this, and it is not horrible! So don’t knock yourself over it, punk!
And then this evening, you did another poetry reading in your town. Damn! I am so happy sharing your enthusiasm and energy. You are incredible my love.-
Hoi hoi S.,
The line between bragging and pride is thin. I choose pride. Grateful for your listen and comment.You, the reason A. set this up/wrote and sang it, Ricky who supported his mother, and me by the coop all have our role in this. And I love what is happening.
The professionals who have listened so far, mentioned:
– Velvet Underground and Nico
– Early Jefferson Airplane
– Early Blondie
It can’t be bad if profs compare you with their heroes.A. has links and screen dumps of the comments.
I envy her courage and love how this all developed.
Happy Friday/weekend to you and A.
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Hey you!
Trying something new is always scary for me.
But you only live once and I had to do this! It felt wrong for someone else to sing those words.
They are from me to you!
So yeah. We all did an our best with this coop and I am very proud of how it turned out.
And hey! It’s Friday!! I’ll be seeing you next week punk! HahahaLove you babe
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Nicely done! Especially this line:
sending you vivid dreams
of how the night has short curves
and breathes falling stars
and breathes falling stars
that traveled 51 yearsThat gave me chills.
Thank you for sharing
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Hey chica! Thank you!
I was terrified posting this, had a stomach ache and everything! Hahaha
Turns out I didn’t have a heart attack so it all went great.
My son has his set up in his room and helped immensely!I’ve also started going to open mic night for poetry in my community
Now that almost gave me a heart attack!I love all of your music so thank you for the inspiration:)
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I’m so glad you posted it! I’ve been checking in every now and then after you told me about it. Can’t believe I almost missed it… 😓
Ooh open mics for poetry? I don’t even have a clue if that’s a thing where I live.
That sounds awesome! I might have to research that.I’m so happy you like the music I post 💕
I could never sing though 🫣
Respect to you! And your son!
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As we would say back in the day, “I’ll give it a 99.8. It’s got heart, it’s got soul, and a beat you can dance too.” So where can I get the album?? Tell me there’s an album. Way to go Adelphina, Gus and Ricky. Rock On!! -Curt
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@anyone doubting the power of coops/update
Posted on StarsRite And SongUTD (very very small forum) but still 66 listens.
Plus posted on Gitaarnet.nl/forum.
The counter there says 245, so a steady 20 people (musicians) per day who come to listen to this.A very nice way to start a new week!
Kind regards, Gus
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.
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hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️
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Hi Crimsin:)
Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. HahaI’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.Thanks for stopping by!
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Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
We are way too goofy. But I love it.
Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
April 29th!-
Hey big sexy!
Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
After we got off FaceTime I started this write.You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
And I keep peeking at you too!I can’t wait to be
face to face
flesh to flesh
All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
Love ya babe
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear A,
Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
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Hi H!
I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
And I have seen your brain!
It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
You should have a little spice daily chica.
At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!Love ya and miss ya!
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This is so cool. I happy you both did it. Nice going to Ricky;))