This reads like playing chess. Or even tennis. Well done!

No. You make me more interesting! You are a blessing. You make me so happy to pick up my pen and write. You really do:)

I just listened to the recording! The music matched the tone of your write perfectly. Even the voice! I’m all for letting go of dead weight in any write. Nicely done:)

I love this write. The whole idea of it too. Plus the title is just epic. lol I will gladly share my book with you, but you’ve already read it. But here’s something new! One day I was riding a ten speed bike that was way too big for me. So...

This flows like a cascading waterfall. So much power in each line that it pushes into the next. Just wow.