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    Love on Paper - coop w/ Duhsjaak (Gus)

    Every day, every secondbeats alive in my mindwhen I’m far away from you    when I’m far away from youconstant moments on rewindenough to fill miles of cloudswith happiness and   Valentine’s Day rain   Valentine’s Day rain.  kissing...

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    • This is so cool. I happy you both did it. Nice going to Ricky;))

      • Chère F.,
        This was the coop I was telling you about.

        I hope you listened with as much fun as A. and I had while making it.
        On the SoundCloud version (identical version) I thank Ricky as well.

        Also on behalf of Adelphina, grateful for you listen and comment!
        Warm regards, Gus

      • Hahaha. Thanks!
        Thank god for Ricky, he helped me sound decent. lol
        It was an experience for sure:)

    • Nicely done, Adel. You and Gus did an amazing job on this song. Love the trippy effect on the chorus, I’m assuming with reverb.. You got a better voice than I do. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hi Ramian,
        I’m grateful for the listen en want to thank you, also on behalve of Adelphina of course.
        Kind regards, Gus

      • Hey Damien

        Much respect for the singers out there!
        Ricky had me doing pushups so I would project my voice better.
        It’s not my thing but I had to give it a shot. lol

        Thanks for taking a listen!

    • Chère A.,
      Hope this finds you well?!

      You see, it’s not half as scary as you may have thought I guess.
      There’s a first time for all fun and harmless things, and this is such a thing. Kicking some ideas around with a very happy sounding outcome!

      I simply loved the whole process. I am grateful for you having done this coop with me. And extra grateful for children who support the quirkies of their parents. And a very nice touch of voice doubling on the chorus.

      I love it from the first to the last second! Until we’ll meet again… electronically (to prevent gossip – there’s not a first for everything I think). Wish your first song published Tuesday will sound as happy as your voice.
      Warm greetings, Gus

      • Thank you for the invite and pushing me out of my comfort zone.
        I will never forget it, that’s for sure. Haha
        Ricky did great with me and as so patient! lol

        Thanks again Gus!
        Rock on buddy!

    • Well, darn. I love how you are branching out in so many directions creatively. And yes, I smile every time you serenade me with this song. (hey thats what you called it!). Props to Gus and Ricky for their help. keep in mind that this is your first try at something like this, and it is not horrible! So don’t knock yourself over it, punk!
      And then this evening, you did another poetry reading in your town. Damn! I am so happy sharing your enthusiasm and energy. You are incredible my love.

      • Hoi hoi S.,
        The line between bragging and pride is thin. I choose pride. Grateful for your listen and comment.

        You, the reason A. set this up/wrote and sang it, Ricky who supported his mother, and me by the coop all have our role in this. And I love what is happening.
        The professionals who have listened so far, mentioned:
        – Velvet Underground and Nico
        – Early Jefferson Airplane
        – Early Blondie
        It can’t be bad if profs compare you with their heroes.

        A. has links and screen dumps of the comments.
        I envy her courage and love how this all developed.
        Happy Friday/weekend to you and A.
        Warm regards, Gus

        • Thanks again Gus.
          What you’ve given me in confidence will never be forgotten amigo:)

      • Hey you!
        Trying something new is always scary for me.
        But you only live once and I had to do this! It felt wrong for someone else to sing those words.
        They are from me to you!
        So yeah. We all did an our best with this coop and I am very proud of how it turned out.
        And hey! It’s Friday!! I’ll be seeing you next week punk! Hahaha

        Love you babe

    • Nicely done! Especially this line:

      sending you vivid dreams
      of how the night has short curves
      and breathes falling stars
      and breathes falling stars
      that traveled 51 years

      That gave me chills.

      Thank you for sharing

      • Hey!
        Thank you:)

        The whole process was quite an experience. Haha
        Thanks for stopping by!

    • You did it!! So cool! Love the song Adelphina and Gus.
      Hoping on more 🙏

      • Hey chica! Thank you!
        I was terrified posting this, had a stomach ache and everything! Hahaha
        Turns out I didn’t have a heart attack so it all went great.
        My son has his set up in his room and helped immensely!

        I’ve also started going to open mic night for poetry in my community
        Now that almost gave me a heart attack!

        I love all of your music so thank you for the inspiration:)

        • I’m so glad you posted it! I’ve been checking in every now and then after you told me about it. Can’t believe I almost missed it… 😓

          Ooh open mics for poetry? I don’t even have a clue if that’s a thing where I live.
          That sounds awesome! I might have to research that.

          I’m so happy you like the music I post 💕
          I could never sing though 🫣
          Respect to you! And your son!

    • As we would say back in the day, “I’ll give it a 99.8. It’s got heart, it’s got soul, and a beat you can dance too.” So where can I get the album?? Tell me there’s an album. Way to go Adelphina, Gus and Ricky. Rock On!! -Curt

      • Hahah! Thank you Curt!
        This was quite the opportunity to do a coop with Gus.
        Never in a million years did I see this coming. I’m so glad I saw it through.
        Thanks again for the awesome comment!

    • @anyone doubting the power of coops/update
      Posted on StarsRite And SongUTD (very very small forum) but still 66 listens.
      Plus posted on Gitaarnet.nl/forum.
      The counter there says 245, so a steady 20 people (musicians) per day who come to listen to this.

      A very nice way to start a new week!
      Kind regards, Gus

    • This takes me back to the early days of MTV…has that feel to it. Makes me wish I could still sing. Nicely done, both of you!

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    Chaos in Color

    I've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing  mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...

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    • Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.

    • Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
      I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
      Hey have a great day!

    • Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.

      • Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
        I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
        It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
        And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.

        Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
        Rock on!

    • hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️

      • Hi Crimsin:)

        Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
        explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. Haha

        I’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
        You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
      We are way too goofy. But I love it.
      Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
      April 29th!

      • Hey big sexy!
        Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
        After we got off FaceTime I started this write.

        You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
        And I keep peeking at you too!

        I can’t wait to be
        face to face
        flesh to flesh
        All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
        Love ya babe

    • (I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)

    • Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
      ❤️k

      • Hi TK!

        It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
        How have you been!

        Yes, I was in a mood hahaha

        Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)

    • Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hi Damien!

        Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
        It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
        And please know I appreciate you too!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌

      • Hi Willow.

        It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
        My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
        Hope that makes sense!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Dear A,

      Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
      Just fabulous. H 🌷

      • Hi H!

        I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
        And I have seen your brain!
        It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
        You should have a little spice daily chica.
        At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
        I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!

        Love ya and miss ya!

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