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Read MoreMidnight Blues in TremeDegas in his studioPaints the NOLA cotton exchangeWhile sad clouds driftLike floating islands of Bible belt dreamsHigh on the calluses of blues guitaristsWailing like the ghosts of HadesThat haunt Claiborne AvenueLike a hobo with his stove...
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Visions I am thrilled that my poem left that impression! Indeed that is exactly the setting for this poem. Love that it felt authentic for you.
John
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Beautifully penned, John. The blues, the imagery, you painted the scene my friend. Fantastic read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWine-Scented Dreams:Ballad of a Creole Moon Louisiana had been returned to France from Spain and my gait had a new liveliness which could only be that of a lover. My fifty-year-old legs carried me down the colonial avenues of...
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Fantastic storytelling, John. With a lot of history and incredible imagery. Another great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Deeply grateful to you Damian for reading my story. Love how you picked up on the history and storytelling here. Very much appreciated. Appreciate you very much.
John
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!
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Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.
John
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This style comes out very naturally for me. I was always into satire, horror and black comedy as a kid. Thanks John.
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The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Read MoreHey lady, are you going my way?Hop in, there's nothing more to sayWe'll find a spot underneath the moonSit back and we'll listen to some tunesYou'll experience the universe & starsPlastic Jesus on the dash of my carJupiter, Neptune...
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Let’s go. I’ll take you for a ride.
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You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
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Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
John
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Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.
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DAMN! What an atmosphere and setting you created here. I feel like it’s New Orleans, circa 1925. Marvelous!