Hey lady, are you going my way?
Hop in, there’s nothing more to say
We’ll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we’ll listen to some tunes
You’ll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I’ll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
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This makes me want to hop in!
Let’s go. I’ll take you for a ride.
When, where? I’m there!
You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
John
Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.